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Lei'lira
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 4:12 pm

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Thread Name: Adopting Teirue
City/Area: Rynmere, Venora
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Linguistics: Children pick up languages more easily than adults do
Linguistics: Being multilingual is very useful
Linguistics: a polyglot is someone who knows several languages, and learns them because they enjoy doing so rather than out of necessity
Mount; Horse: Long trials of riding are hard on those who aren't used to it
Mount; Horse: Sore leg muscles are a guarantee for inexperienced riders
Mount; Horse: See to your horse's needs before your own

Non Skill Knowledge

Language: Basa
Basa: spoken and written in Northern Idalos

Language: Cerke
Cerke: a written language of Northern Idalos

Common: numbers

Language: Haltunga
Haltunga: language of the Lotharro

Language: Murmasian
Murmasian: a spoken language of Northern Idalos

Language: Perwarshian
Perwarshian: spoken and written in Northern Idalos

Language: Pij'thak
Pij'thak: spoken and written in Northern Idalos

Language: Sulnysian
Sulnysian: spoken and written in Northern Idalos
Sulnysian: a rare language

Location: Venora

Location: The Little Garden
The Little Garden: an orphanage located in Venora

NPC: Atreyas
Atreyas: an orphan at The Little Garden
Atreyas: adopted by Lei'lira
Atreyas: Lil'ari's friend
Atreyas: doesn't want to be separated from Lil'ari

NPC: Evan
Evan: an orphan at The Little Garden
Evan: is a polyglot who speaks 8 languages, and can read a 9th written one
Evan: Kei'iru's friend
Evan: is a Lotharro

NPC: Kei'iru
Kei'iru: an orphan at The Little Garden
Kei'iru: adopted by Lei'lira
Kei'iru: Lil'ari's younger sister

NPC: Lil'ari
Lil'ari: an orphan at The Little Garden
Lil'ari: adopted by Lei'lira
Lil'ari: Kei'iru's older sister
Lil'ari: Atreyas's friend
Lil'ari: has an ose-bori

NPC: Maybella Dawson
Maybella Dawson: runs The Little Garden
Maybella Dawson: cares deeply about the kids she looks after


Loot: four kids adopted (all already approved personal NPCs)
Injuries/Overstepping: sore leg muscles from several long trials of riding
Renown: Maybe 15 because she made a sizable donation to the orphanage, and adopted 4 kids? As a noble, the donation might be expected of her, but it is still a good sized one, and she wouldn't be expected to adopt four kids.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Max
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 5:28 pm

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Thread Name: She Who Made Me Choose
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Recognizing Someone You've Only Met Once
Detection: Recognizing a Slip in Someone's Mask
Detection: Recognizing a Obvious Lie
Discipline: Choosing to Negotiate Over Taking Revenge
Intelligence: Gaining Access to Another Person's Information Network
Negotiation: Offering Something They Want

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Nightshade Eld
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Profession: The Best Hero
Renown: +460
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 3:58 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Then He Sneezed
City/Area: Etzos surrounding area
Notes/Warnings: Nope, just a frustrated birb
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge
Animal Handling: Animals can apparently have allergies
Meditation: Keep your Concentration
Meditation: Block out everything unimportant
Meditation: Useful for 'beating the tar' out of anxiety
Meditation: Breathing exercises
Meditation: Practice without distractions

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Nir'wei
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Joined: Mon Apr 18, 2016 6:38 am
Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Animal Handler of The Menagerie
Renown: +146
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 6:40 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Familiar Company.
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: Gore and blood. Also feels.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sinnamyn:
Needlecraft: Sewing together Feathers
Needlecraft: Simple end knots
Fieldcraft: How to Prep bones for Craft use
Fieldcraft: How to Prep Feathers for Craft use
Fieldcraft: Using a Pruning Knife to prepare Decorations
Sculpting: {Carving}Using a Pruning Knife to carve into bone (Not the best)
Psychology: Explaining your mindset (On death) To someone else
Teaching: Giving pointers on how clean off Tunawa Sap.
Strength: Carrying Dead Animal parts
Discipline: Forcing yourself to watch something even when it makes you sick (out of respect)

(Non-skill)
Nir'wei: Has some interesting traveling companions
Nir'wei: Tried to help
Nir'wei: Gave me some time alone with Avery.
Nir'wei: Helped me respect Avery's Memory.
Nir'wei: Let me stay with him as I had no transportation
Nir'wei: Didn't know, but that's okay
Avery: Fought Valiantly
Avery: is now dead
Avery: Was A crutch
Avery: Was a fool.. but still a good girl
Avery: Was a Tunawa by heart.
Self: Grief, even that can make you scream
Self: Bad luck... all the time.
Location: Nir'wei's Land

Nir'wei:
Mount (Sohr Khal): Flying while encumbered.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Slow-circling points of interest use less energy than hovering.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Use high-altitude international air currents for cruising.
Mount (Sohr Khal): One-handed riding.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Keep your eyes where you want to go, not always in front of you.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Gentle descents conserve more energy than rapid dives.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Maintaining control of the animal while multitasking.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Rapid ascents can leave one too tired to pursue an enemy.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Hunt from higher altitudes and descend into targets for low-energy, high-impact assaults.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Dealing with altitude sickness during high-altitude flight.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Adjusting for arrow drop-off at high altitudes.

Loot:
Sinnamynn:
Loot Gained: Most of Avery's Bone's, a lot of her feathers, Avery's Skull, Six feather and talon ornaments made by Nir'wei, One Bone and feather necklace too big to wear made by Nir'wei.
Loot Lost: One amazing Sparrowhawk. Sparrowhawk meat, 3/4ths of a Magpie, Hair ornament made of Avery's feathers given to Nir'wei. 1 ruined Sparrowhawk saddle

Nir'wei: Gained single sparrowhawk feather-charm.

Injuries/Overstepping:
Sinnamynn: One eagle claw mark on side of face, length of time to regenerate should be about 3-8 trials. Minor Concussion: Bit long black out
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Vega
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Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2017 5:43 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Wandering, wondering.
Renown: +300
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 11:10 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Another Day in Parad-Ice
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nurp
Requested Rewards:


Enrick


Knowledge:
Skill
  • Field Craft: Bringing the Right Tool for the Right Job
  • Field Craft: Breaking Ice with Ice-Picks
  • Strength: Swinging An Ice-Pick
  • Fishing: Ice Fishing Requires Patience
  • Endurance: Sitting on Ice
  • Fishing: Ice Fishing is Difficult
  • Fishing: Slow and Steady with the Reel
General
  • Vega: The Half-born Ginger
  • Vega: Also Biqaj and Sev'ryn Mixed
  • Vega: Has Many Similarities As You
  • Vega: Roams the World
  • Vega: Has Family in Desnind
  • Desnind: Home of the Sev'ryn
  • Desnind: Located Within Southern Idalos
  • Sev'ryn: Friendly and Respectful Folk
  • Sev'ryn: Have Dreams of Familiars
  • Sev'ryn: Generally Short
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Vega


Knowledge:
Fishing: Ice fishing
Fishing: Live bait for ice fishing
Fishing: Jiggle the line in ice fishing
Fishing: Ice fishing requires you to "feel for stickies" on the ocean floor
Fishing: More likely to lose the catch during pull up in ice fishing
Fishing: Ice fishing requires more preparation for the cold
Psychology: Parentage is important to identity
Psychology: Not everyone wants to travel
Psychology: Who we are is inexorably wrapped up in who we were

Loot:Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Alistair
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Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +520
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 1:50 pm

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Thread Name: Lunarfall
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Some violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Shadow Sting
Polearms: Spear - Incorporating low-lying movements
Polearms: Spear - Matching a foe's speed
Polearms: Spear - Adjusting one's stance for a specific foe
Polearms: Spear - Disarming a claw-dagger is difficult
Acrobatics: Gravelmonger

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 3:29 pm

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Thread Name: Learning A Man
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meh it's fine

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 5:14 pm

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Thread Name: Dancing with Daggers
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: It's kind of boring
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Silum
Polearms: Spear - Creating a new 'form'
Detection: Recognizing your form's potential weaknesses
Detection: Following someone's evasions preemptively
Detection: Recognizing an opponent's counters
Acrobatics: Dancing with your enemy

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Yes, but they would only last for like a few hours. Thanks Sesser! And Grandmaster Endurance!
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Faith
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Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Philanthropist
Renown: +1000
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Sat Apr 21, 2018 6:21 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Relief Effort 1: Base Camp
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is part of a series of thread involving a number of pcs and a few days. The full list and overview are here
Requested Rewards:


Faith


Knowledge:
Skill
Leadership: Assigning tasks according to talent
Leadership: Understanding that your role is necessary, if not glorious
Logistics: Need to consider all options.
Logistics: Organising a relief effort
Persuasion: Putting forward an emotional argument to the invested.
Persuasion: Praise sandwich is good.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No
Collaboration: nope
Magic EXP: no
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Alistair
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Sun Apr 22, 2018 1:27 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Investing in Ashes
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Slightly graphic
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Politics: Investing in a political stronghold
Politics: Investing in the community for support and funding
Politics: Showing people you care for their support
Politics: Building your public image
Rhetoric: Making a speech amidst an event
Rhetoric: Using speech to announce political intentions

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Yes, please
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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