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Patrick
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Profession: Trouble
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Wed Apr 18, 2018 3:38 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Guardian of Orimar
City/Area: Borderline Etzos, Ne'haer territories
Notes/Warnings: Warnings: Language is about it
Notes: Gangui's role in this plot is to Guest ST, he does not gain any XP/Lore but can accrue Fame for his Faction
Requested Rewards: Get ready!!!
Patrick
Skill
  • Research: Solving Ancient Riddles
  • Research: Opening the Way to Orimar
  • Endurance: Walking Through Snow Drifts
  • Endurance: Enduring Frigid Conditions
  • Strength: Shoving Through Snow Piles
  • Strength: Operating Ancient Pulley Gears
  • Field Craft: Using Resin to Start Fire
  • Rupturing: Opening Compression Portals At Distances
General
  • Personal: The Discovery of Orimar's Guardian
  • Personal: On the Verge of A Major Discovery
  • Personal: The Trial of Orimar's Guardian
  • Location: The Guardian of Orimar
  • Location: The Valley of Orimar
Ellen'wyn
Skill
  • Flying: Taking off from a standstill
  • Flying: Searching for a safe place to land
  • Flying: Flapping during descent to slow the landing
  • Endurance: First degree burns aren’t that bad
  • Acrobatics: Balancing on ice
  • Acrobatics: Bend your knees to absorb heavy impact
  • Field Craft: Lighting a fire with flammable resins
  • Strength: Put your weight into it
General
  • Personal: The Trial of Orimar's Guardian
  • Location: The Guardian of Orimar
  • Location: The Valley of Orimar
  • Patrick: Rupture mage
  • Rupturing: Can teleport people
Finn
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  • Endurance: Frostbite.
  • Climbing: Snow-covered rock makes for uneasy footing.
  • Defiance: Making fire jump from one brazier to another.
  • Strength: Setting an ancient pulley into motion.
  • Climbing: Gravity-aided descent.
  • Stealth: Listening in on private conversation.
General
  • Personal: The Trial of Orimar's Guardian
  • Location: The Guardian of Orimar
  • Location: The Valley of Orimar
Oberan
Skill
  • Acrobatics: recovering when stumbling
  • Climbing: cold fingers make for poor grip
  • Climbing: searching for handholds and footholds by touch
  • Climbing: the three out of four rule
  • Climbing: recognizing hand- and footholds
  • Climbing: climbing slippery stone
  • Climbing: keeping your hands and feet close to your body
  • Strength: grip strength
General
  • Personal: The Trial of Orimar's Guardian
  • Location: The Guardian of Orimar
  • Location: The Valley of Orimar
Niv
-Opted for no lore.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: +15 For All? For the discovery of a ancient location once sacred to the tribe living there?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes; For Patrick and Finn.
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OOC Note: As of Ashan 717 Patrick has been cursed with Sesser, therefore once a season he's at risk of turning into a Sessfiend. Should the occassion actually come to occur, PC's are warned to consider the extreme risk of injury and even their life; before proceeding to participate in the event. Looking forward to the potential plots and threads to come!
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Kasoria
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Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:34 am
Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
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Wed Apr 18, 2018 7:59 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The World Beneath The World
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Language, Smelly Men, Bird-Things...

Requested Rewards:

Kasoria

Knowledge:
Deception: Playing Dumb and Deaf to Lure an Enemy Close
Discipline: Don't Drag Out a Murder (Unless Ordered To)
Discipline: Keeping Witnesses to a Minimum
Endurance: Pushing On Through Exhaustion
Endurance: Swallowing the Pain of a Twisted Ankle
Intimidation: Using a Sword as a Pointer
Intimidation: Just a Hint of Steel, Promising Pain
Running: Proper Breathing
Tactics: Spotting Weaknesses In Your Enemy's Grip
Tactics: Letting Yourself Be Seen to Flush Out a Hidden Watcher
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Reverse Elbow Strike
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Reversing a Dagger Back Into The Person Holding It


Non-Skill-Knowledge:
NPC Vorund: "Protection" Is Not Just a Euphemism
PC Noth: The Nameless, Nosy, Terrifying Bird-Daemon


Noth

Endurance: Running for a Prolonged Period
Endurance: Uneven Terrain
Endurance: Using a Wing Multiple Times
Endurance: Taking a Breather
Strength: Using a Fulcrum to Move a Person
Strength: Pulling Yourself Up a Building
Physics: Fulcrums
Physics: Gravity Amplifies Downward Blows


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A - Memory
Renown: For Kasoria, yes (if indirectly); for Noth... no, probably not
Collaboration: Yep!
Magic EXP: No
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"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
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Alistair
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Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 6:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +520
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Wed Apr 18, 2018 10:50 am

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Thread Name: Lunch for Shmucks
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 5 Posts in a Collab Thread = 10 for Ali, 6 = 11 for Patrick

Psychology: Laying things to rest
Psychology: Saying goodbye to a former lover with care
Psychology: Coming forward about old feelings
Negotiation: Beginning a relationship by discussing terms
Negotiation: Allowing your partner the option to opt out early
Disguise: Minor touches can help conceal
Disguise: When living in your own skin is dangerous
Discipline: Maintaining composure at an emotional moment
Discipline: Crying but not breaking
Discipline: Managing grief to allow for love

Fridgar: Gone, but still loved
Fridgar: To Him
Fridgar: A loving man, a kind man, a caring man
Patrick: My partner, from now until the end
Patrick: More open than before
Patrick: Gentlemanly and compassionate

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probs not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Zipper
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Joined: Sat May 13, 2017 9:14 am
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Profession: Professional Scowler
Renown: 0
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Wed Apr 18, 2018 5:02 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Doran Chronicles: Rise of the Dawn of the War of the Planet of the Dorans
City/Area: Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Ungrateful brothers and worrying sisters. I get an extra knowledge from the Chalice of Fortune. Yay me.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

FINNY’s Lores:
Stealth: Entering Zipper's House Undetected.
Defiance: Firing up the stove.
Defiance: Restraining the elements from seeking revenge.
Detection: Searching and finding Mom’s letter
Tactics: Quickly changing subjects
Unarmed Combat: Defending against a chokehold
Persuasion: Arguing that keeping secrets from Vuda is pointless.
Discipline: Not retaliating against Zipper’s assault.
Discipline: Obeying Zipper's command.

Location (Etzos): Zipper’s home
Zipper: Obsessed with Doran.
Zipper: Not happy to see you
Zipper: Like a volcano

Zipper
Business Management: Creating the product
Business Management: Diversifying your brand
Business Management: Don’t release a product that isn’t ready
Business Management: Compromise is a necessary evil
Business Management: Perfecting the product design
Business Management: Quality control
Business Management: Taking into account mass manufacturing aspects of the product
Intelligence: Correcting a lapse in intel focus
Stealth: Sneaking up on a home invader
Strength: Lifting up a growing teenager by the neck
Woodworking: Inspecting the handiwork

Loot: Nah.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing lasting.
Renown: Um, neighbours heard the screams? Give what you can.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: For Finn
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Kasoria
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Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:34 am
Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
Renown: +215
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Wed Apr 18, 2018 9:55 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Midnight Menu
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Some Foul Language, risk of being Eaten by Hungry Hairy Dude

Requested Rewards:

Kasoria

Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending to Abandon a "Friend"
Cooking: Skinning a Rabbit for the Pot
Cooking: Rabbit Stew with Vegetables
Cooking: Eating Bread Before it Turns Stale (and Rocky)
Deception: Staying Unnoticed with Modest Clothes
Deception: Make a Lie As Close to Truth as You Can
Discipline: Alert for Traps At All Times
Discipline: Giving Away the Bare Minimum in an Answer
Discipline: Remembering Your World, and How Empty of Trust It Is
Discipline: Keeping Not Just Your Word, But Your Oath
Intelligence: Discerning Meaning in Metaphor
Investigation: Trying to Subtly Question a Man's Intentions


Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC Kovic: Old "Associate" of Kasoria, Fellow Mercenary
PC Kovic: Known to Kasoria as "Paps"
PC Kovic: Charming, Affable, Murderer
PC Kovic: Apparently Working with the Al’Angyryl
Etzos: Prices Soar as the Cylus Goes on
Etzos: Doomsday Loonies Emerge During Cylus
Etzos, Outer Perimeter: Not a Safe Place to Flaunt Your Wealth
Location: The Gored Bull, Etzos Butchers


Kovic
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Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Nah, it's just a dinner
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
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Nightshade Eld
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Joined: Wed Aug 10, 2016 5:43 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: The Best Hero
Renown: +460
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Wed Apr 18, 2018 10:34 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Taking Notes
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Noting in particular
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Business Management: Having weapons on hand for classes
Business Management: Having a quality product
Business Management: Different workplaces hold different standards
Business Management: A variety of jobs not always relating to the business main purpose
Business Management: Competition
Deception: Half-truths about how interested you are

Loot: A Spring Loaded Dagger
A Tamo Dagger set(2)
A Sai set(2)
A Swordbreaker
A Cane Sword
A Three Section Staff
A Reaper Scythe
A Lace
A War Axe
A War Hammer
A War Sledge
A Spiked Flail
A Short Bow
A Long Bow
A Cross Bow
A Javelin
25 Throwing Daggers
And a Chain Sickle
160 Arrows
160 Crossbow Bolts

20% Discount

The grand total of 1384gn
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Arlo Creede
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Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2017 9:15 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Traveler
Renown: +438
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Thu Apr 19, 2018 6:43 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Nella's Pearl
City/Area: The Hollow Sea
Notes/Warnings: Talking about death
Requested Rewards:


Arlo


Knowledge: (5 posts = 10 knowledge)
Discipline: Not giving an opinion
Mount: Horse: Use a step to make getting in the saddle easier
Mount: Horse: Leading someone else by your own horse's movements
Mount: Horse: How loose or tight the reins are is important.
Mount: Horse: Which part of the feet to put in stirrups
Mount: Horse: Steering by weight
Mount: Horse: Lean forward when going uphill
Woodwork: Crafting a sign
Woodwork: Char wood to make it more visible.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



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Knowledge:
Mount: Horse: Use a step to make getting in the saddle easier
Mount: Horse: Letting your horse follow another
Mount: Horse: How loose or tight the reins are is important.
Mount: Horse: How to put your feet in stirrups
Mount: Horse: Steering by weight
Mount: Horse: Give the horse enough rein to move it's head, but not enough to drop it completely
Mount: Horse: Lean forward when going uphill
Mount: Horse: Dismount
Psychology: Interfering in other people's relationship is a slippery slope
Psychology: Age doesn't matter in relationships




Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Zipper
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Joined: Sat May 13, 2017 9:14 am
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Profession: Professional Scowler
Renown: 0
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Thu Apr 19, 2018 11:02 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Doran Chronicles: The Plan to Eradicate All Xiurs
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No Xiurs were hurt in the making of this thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Finn’s Lores:
Stealth: Leaving Zipper's house without waking her
Stealth: Preparing a surprise breakfast undetected
Strength: Yanking Zipper's blanket from her clutches
Tactics: Making a mean comment preemptively so it can't be used against you
Tactics: Coming up with a plan to shake Gangui and Vuda
Discipline: deciding not to throw eggs at Zipper even though she deserved it
Socialization: recognizing the tell-tale signs of a disturbed recluse.
Socialization: admitting your mistakes
Socialization: giving Zipper a compliment
Etiquette: setting a table, properly
Intimidation: shouting commands at Zipper

Zipper’s lores
Attunement: Frequency - Finn
Attunement: Note - Hope
Attunement: Note - Fear
Detection: Sensing greed
Intimidation: The Death Glare
Tactics: Mitigating a liability
Woodworking: A narrative to go with the carving
Woodworking: Contemplating design
Woodworking: Salvaging unfinished work

Loot: +1 letter to Finn
Injuries/Overstepping: nu
Renown: nu
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope. Not enough use.
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Max
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Renown: +257
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 7:54 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Underclass
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Recognizing a Familiar Voice
Discipline: Not Losing Your Cool in Public Due to Fear
Discipline: Staying in the Moment Despite Traumatic Memories
Intimidation: Reminding People of Your Violent Character
Intelligence: Interrogating a Friend
Resistance: Drinking to Ease Pain

The Raven: Drug Kingpin of Almund
The Raven: Enjoys Power and Control
The Red Ravens: The Raven's Gang in Almund
The Red Raven Sharks: Just as Bad as Their Boss

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Zipper
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 3:06 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Doran Chronicles: A song of finns and Dorans
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: o_o
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Zipper:

Intelligence: Gaining intel from both friends and foes
Intelligence: Grooming a child into an operative
Intelligence: Leaking intel to gain intel
Intelligence: The breadth and depth of a city-wide network
Politics: Greasing the wheels of the system
Politics: The role of crime in society
Strength: Carrying a huge sack of Dorans
Transmutation: Ether Missile - Launching the Missile through the feet
Transmutation: Ether Missile - The Maximized beam of a Master

Finn:
Acrobatics: Smooth Landing At The End Of The Slide
Tactics: Revealing Secrets At The Appropriate Time
Intelligence: Keeping Track Of What To Say To Whom
Intelligence: The Tribulations Of A Double-Agent
Transmutation: Unintentional Corrosion
Transmutation: Anger Stirs The Inner Ether
Transmutation: Conjuring A Spark Of Ether
Transmutation: Ether Missile
Transmutation: Ether Missiles Are Easy To Overstep

Location (Etzos Underground): “The Temple”

Loot: nein
Injuries/Overstepping: a bit of exhaustion and aching for Finn in the next 2 days
Renown: nu
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Finn
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