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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Jan 21, 2018 11:14 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Trees are people, too
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Qit'ria

Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 knowledge)
  1. Stealth: Find cover before you need it
  2. Stealth: Groups of people provide cover
  3. Unarmed Combat: Punch first
  4. Endurance: Punching hurts your hand
  5. Intimidation: Snarl when threatened
  6. Tactics: Don't fight when it benefits you
  7. Discipline: Calming down when presented with an alternate solution
  8. Teaching: Using real examples when translating languages
  9. Cooking: Rub the raw meat with spices
  10. Cooking: Cook meat on a skewer
  11. Logistics: Ensure proper preparation for cold season
Other
  1. Katara is taking over Grenald's business soon
  2. Faith; Healer for the Order of the Adunih
  3. Faith; is on the Council
  4. Faith; is an Officer for Welfare
  5. Faith; will stop a bullying situation
  6. Scalvoris; ties ribbons around trees in Vhalar
  7. Faith; pays respect to Moseke
  8. Faith; is a cook at a restaurant
  9. Faith; knows the traditional Sev'ryn greeting
  10. Faith; grows vegetables
  11. Faith; doesn't hunt
  12. Faith; to be married to Paddyrags
  13. Faith; to be married in Desnind
  14. Faith; is pregnant
  15. Faith; helped find a better skins buyer
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes


Faith

Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 knowledge max)
Leadership: Taking charge of a potentially volatile situation
Leadership: Use rank and renown to diffuse a situation
Leadership: Threaten with a smile
Leadership: Stop people being disappointed by offering something else.
Negotiation: Barter and trade
Psychology: Don't offer charity, offer barter.
Teaching: How to cook over a campfire

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Helping Qit'ria (avoiding a fight, offering fair trade, showing her a new skin-seller helping with the stew) 4 x good deeds = +8?
Collaboration: Yes
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Charlie Warrick
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Jan 22, 2018 1:41 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Black and White
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Cheesy af. Only Darcy, Oliver, and Charlie are requesting rewards here.
Requested Rewards:

Oliver
Politics: Giving speeches
Politics: Enforcing positive change
Politics: Appealing to nobles' egos
Etiquette: Thanking people for their charity
Etiquette: Surprising someone with an honour
Dancing: Keeping in time
Dancing: Leading a woman
Dancing: Spinning a woman into you

Darcyanna
Politics: Holding your own in a matter of barony business transactions
Politics: Calming your nerves to perform your best
Musical Instrument (Piano): Playing a duet on the same piano
Musical Instrument (Piano): Following a count in
Musical Instrument (Piano): Taking pointers from a Master
Musical Instrument (Piano): Taking the lead during a duet

Non-Skill:
Oliver: Had Malero secretly come to the gala
Oliver: Let you join Malero in a duet
Oliver: Follows Rynlism
Oliver: Is pretty taken with Charlie
Oliver: Wants you to play at his future wedding...oneday
Charlie: Is exactly the right person for Oliver
Charlie: Complimented your playing

NPC: Master Malero
Master Malero: offered you tuition

Charlie
Politics: Maintaining a superficial veneer
Politics: Beer is a ‘poor man’s drink’
Etiquette: Don’t flirt so much in public
Etiquette: Offering your congratulations to a friend
Dancing: Following a man
Dancing: Following someone’s guidance
Dancing: Spinning

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Positive for Darcy for playing a gala, positive for Charlie and Oliver for dancing at a gala
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Jan 22, 2018 5:38 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Show Stopper
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Merces got banned, so I had to finish this up.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: 15xp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:25 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: When I'm lost, I feel so very found
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Padraig

Knowledge:
None required


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so?
Collaboration: Yes


Faith

Knowledge:
None requested.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Positive for gift giving?
Collaboration: Yes
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Jan 22, 2018 8:08 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: One, two, three..... eat!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Arlo

Knowledge:
Cooking: Hot chocolate
Cooking: Oats with dates and honey
Fieldcraft: Checking the horses in camp, too
Hunting: Much more difficult in the depths of winter
Logistics: Planning gifts in advance
Navigation: Different kinds of maps.
Navigation: Can be by stars
Psychology: Reading difficulties can be for a variety of reasons
Storytelling: Everything is a story
Tactics: Vega cheats at snowball fights. Be prepared


Loot: Ledger is updated
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Gift: Woodworkers kit (+2), Bumblebee Hat (+2), Bumblebee undergarments (+2), Chocolate Selection (+2) = +8
Collaboration: Yes


Vega

Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Keep horses warm in the coldest seasons
Carpentry: Cover where you're working to prevent dust
Climbing: Tree climbing in the snow
Climbing: Grabbing on with your knees
Storytelling: Tale from childhood
Storytelling: Giving a gift and a story
Strength: Climbing a tree builds strength in your legs.
Strength: Using your upper body weight to move
Tactics: Dirty tactics are fine.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: 2 x Books (+4), 1 x hat (+2), 1 x carving (+2) 1 x shell (+2) = +10
Collaboration: Yes
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Jan 22, 2018 9:57 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Footloose
City/Area: Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Continuation of Virikai and Maebella attending a formal function.
Requested Rewards:

Maebella
(Skill: 11)
Etiquette: Bowing and Curtseying
Etiquette: Don’t Offend Your Date
Etiquette: Eat Small Bites
Etiquette: Make a Good First Impression
Politics: Focus on Education, not Marriage
Politics: Formal Functions are Good to Circulate
Rhetoric: Calling Someone Out
Rhetoric: False Modesty
Rhetoric: Formal Introductions
Rhetoric: Polite Conversation
Seduction: Allowing Another to Lead
Academia: Motivations for Study
(NPC) Lord Taelis Voren: Lord Voren
(NPC) Lord Orthen Voren: Heir Voren
(NPC) Lord Verity Talius: Lord Talius
(NPC) Lord Talius: At Odds with his Son
Viden: Alcohol Prohibition Laws
Viden Aristocracy: Talius Family
Viden Aristocracy: Voren Family
Virikai Talius: Left Tertiary Studies for a While
Voren Family: Keep Tabs on Me


Virikai
(Skill: 11)
Etiquette: Bowing and Curtseying
Etiquette: Fine Food Engenders Fine Company
Etiquette: Managing a Partner’s Discomfort
Etiquette: Defending Your Partner’s Honour
Politics: Focus on Education, not Marriage
Politics: Formal Functions are Good to Circulate
Rhetoric: Formal Introductions
Rhetoric: Polite Conversation
Seduction: Hand Placement
Seduction: Reading Signals
Seduction: Protective Gestures
Academia: Motivations for Study
Maebella: Anti-Social
Maebella: Descendant of the Voren Family
Meabella: Disowned by the Voren Family
(NPC) Lord Taelis Voren: Lord Voren
(NPC) Lord Orthen Voren: Heir Voren
(NPC) Lord Verity Talius: Lord Talius
(NPC) Lord Talius: Disapproves of Me
Viden: Alcohol Prohibition Laws
Viden Aristocracy: Talius Family
Viden Aristocracy: Voren Family


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Something Positive for general interactions at the Function?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Jan 22, 2018 10:31 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Different Kind of Dance
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Maebella

(NPC): Orthen Voren: Hates Me?
Psychology: A Star Can’t Fit into a Square
Virikai Talius: Dominant
Virikai Talius: Intimidating
Virikai Talius: Likes to be in Control
Virikai Talius: Potentially Violent


Virikai

Maebella: A Defiant Paradox
Maebella: Beautiful when Blushing
Maebella: Sensitive to Seductive Touches
Maebella: Responsive to Me
(NPC): Orthen Voren: Hates Maebella?
Psychology: A Star Can’t Fit into a Square


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Jan 23, 2018 4:00 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: When the Cat's Away, the Mice Will Play
City/Area: Sweetvine Woods, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mild Violence against an Aye-Aye mouse
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Hunting: Aye-Aye Mouse Kill
Thrown (Chakram): Hold it from inside the ring
Butchering: Carving up an Aye-Aye Mouse
Field Craft: Setting up a smoking fire
Carpentry: Setting up a smoking spit
Cooking: Cold Smoked Aye-Aye Mouse jerky

Loot: 3lb cold smoked aye-aye mouse jerky
Aye-aye mouse bones
Aye-aye mouse pelt
Aye-aye mouse offal
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)

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Valeria Burhan
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Jan 23, 2018 6:25 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Soirée] I'm Spinning Around...
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Valeria Burhan
Knowledge:
  • Skill Knowledge
    • Cosmetology: Don't lace a corset too tightly
    • Endurance: Breathing through pain
    • Politics: Determining another's rank in Ryn society
    • Detection: Spotting possessiveness in others
    • Politics: Damage control
    • Rhetoric: The art of small talk
    • Deception: Faking disinterest
    • Acting: Exaggerating weakness
    • Detection: Spotting signs of true affection
    • Etiquette: Giving appropriate congratulations
  • Non-Skill Knowledge
    • Nathaniel Endor: You fainted on him
    • Nathaniel Endor: Handsome
    • Velaine Krome: A strong young woman
    • Velaine Krome: Lightweight with alcohol
    • Velaine Krome: Was in Ne'haer
    • Velaine Krome: Betrothed to Nathaniel Endor
    • Nathaniel Endor: A man of his word (apparently)
    • Velaine Krome and Nathaniel Endor: A pretty pair
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: No (injuries will be revealed in a later thread)
Fame: Positive would be lovely if possible but it's more likely that she'll be causing problems so it's up to the reviewer!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Nathaniel Endor
Knowledge:
  • Skill Knowledge
    • Strength: Catching a Woman on the Fly
    • Etiquette: Asking for a Seat for the Lady
    • Etiquette: The Varying Fashion Choices of Each House
    • Etiquette: Never Imply a Woman is Inebriated
    • Etiquette: Excusing Oneself From a Conversation
    • Politics: Actions Often End in Misinterpreted Rumors
    • Politics: A Man Always Loses When Around Women
    • Politics: Marriage Information Travels Quickly
    • Politics: Appropriate Word Choice is Important
    • Politics: Honor Swearing Can Solves Problems
  • Non-Skill Knowledge
    • House Burhan: Valeria Burhan
    • Valeria Burhan: Always Dressed to Impress
    • Valeria Burhan: May Be Killing Herself to Look Good
    • Valeria Burhan: Knows Velaine Krome
    • Valeria Burhan: Not the Best Introduction
    • Valeria Burhan: Alcoholic?
    • Velaine Krome: Capable of Finding Me
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Something positive for being Val's saviour, but reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Velaine Krome
Knowledge:
  • Skill Knowledge
    • Politics: Nobles Love Gossips
    • Politics: Making Sure The Good Impressions Last
    • Politics: Small Talks are Important
    • Politics: Knowing When to Stay Out of Things
    • Deception: Pretending to be Innocent
    • Deception: Playing Ignorance to Keep Up Appearance
    • Deception: Making Up Excuses
    • Detection: Noticing When Someone Lost Interest
    • Detection: Biqaj Eyes Shift Colors to Show Emotions
  • Non-Skill Knowledge
    • Valeria Burhan: An Old Acquaintance
    • Valeria Burhan: Still Unattached
    • Valeria Burhan: Upset When Discussing About Partners
    • Valerian Burhan: Probably Won't Get Along With Nathaniel
    • Nathaniel Endor: Keeps You on Your Toes
    • Nathaniel Endor: Uninterested in Noble Small Talks
    • Nathaniel Endor: Probably Won't Get Along With Valeria
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Yanahalqah
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Jan 23, 2018 8:58 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Noble blood, noble heart?
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Celeste continues to be the most savage noble in Rynmere
Requested Rewards:

CELESTE:
Cosmetology: Tiny finishing touches to make up make one look polished
Cosmetology: Dressing for pregnancy
Intelligence: Know as much as possible before an official visit
Intelligence: Learn little details to ensure that you are well received
Intelligence: Consider tiny details, even down to gender of your guard
Intelligence: When visiting children, gauge how your guard will react around them at home
Intelligence: Know names before you arrive
Persuasion: There's nothing as persuasive as proving them wrong

YANA:
Etiquette: how to address a Baroness
Etiquette: An appointment is an appointment
Deception: Sometimes deception backfires
Discipline: being polite to nobles
Discipline: executing assignments you don’t want to
Discipline: giving dull assignments your all
Politics: Sucking up to nobles isn’t a good idea?
Politics: Making a good impression on political figures to further your career
Politics: studying superior politicians in order to grow
Celeste Andaris: Baroness of Astedia
Celeste Andaris: does charities
Celeste Andaris: Political Predator
Celeste Andaris: Has an adopted daughter

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame:
  • Celeste: Positive for giving gifts to children (x10) and donation of money (x200gn)
  • Yana: positive for doing her job well enough to leave a good impression
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Magic is banned in Rynmere, yo. No filthy mages here.
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