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Zane
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Review Request 2.1.3

Fri Jan 19, 2018 5:09 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dead Man's Daughter I
City/Area: Andaris City
Notes/Warnings: Some swearing. This is part 3 in Dead Man's Tale storyline, cut off so I can get more rewards, muahaha
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: A small woman next to a large man
Detection: Through a window
Discipline: Not talking is hard
Investigation: Catching the meaning of someone's words
Investigation: Criminal offences in Rynmere
Psychology: Fear of mages

Sarah: Dead man's daughter, hopefully
Sarah: A mage
Sarah: You promised her safety to her father
Sarah: A small woman
Sarah: Last name Dj'pyrj
Philosophy: Keeping a promise, no matter what

Loot: N/A...yet
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Yanahalqah
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Review Request 2.1.3

Fri Jan 19, 2018 5:20 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Family reunion
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Discipline: doing things that stress you out
Discipline: standing up for yourself
Discipline: not retaliating when struck
Discipline: suppressing habits is difficult
Rhetoric: countering arguments
Philosophy: the shortcomings of violence

Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Yanahalqah
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Review Request 2.1.3

Fri Jan 19, 2018 5:25 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: mother daughter talk
City/Area: etzos
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
none

Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Caius Gawyne
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sat Jan 20, 2018 3:12 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hidden History
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope, just two nobles nerds hanging out in the library.
Requested Rewards:
Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge:
Deception: Not giving your noble title
Deception: Avoiding straightforward answers
Investigation: Casually querying interest
Investigation: Offering opinions to open up conversation
Politics: Organization: The RCA
Politics: The history of House Krome
Research: Knowing the validity of your sources
Research: Everyone has an opinion
Research: Historical records vary in reliability
Research: Using more than one source to get a whole picture

Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC: Velaine
Velaine: From Krome
Velaine: Wants to find Gerard's sunken treasure
Velaine: Needed a library tour
Rynmere: Lake Krome
Noble House: Krome
Noble House: Krome: Gerard Krome was the First Krome

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Positive, please! Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: Nope
Velanie Krome
Skill Knowledge:
Research: Going to the Library
Research: How Books in Libraries are Arranged
Research: Looking for Historical Records
Research: Sorting For Relevant Information
Research: Gawyne's are Good Record Keepers
Acting: Pretending to be a Commoner
Persuasion: Asking for Someone's Help
Psychology: Deflecting a Question
Psychology: Basing Lies on Truths

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius: From Umbridge, Gawyne
Caius: Rynmere University Student
Caius: Also A Student in Viden
Caius: Wants to Find The Labyrinth
Rynmere: Labyrinth Underground
Rynmere: Labyrinth Entrance in Warren's Peak

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Positive, please! Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Last edited by Caius Gawyne on Sun Jan 21, 2018 1:17 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 250
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Caius Gawyne
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sat Jan 20, 2018 4:13 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Whatever the Heart Desires
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nah.
Requested Rewards:
Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge (8+3=11):
Cosmetology: Letting the clothier make the decisions
Deception: Not telling the entire truth
Deception: Withholding the details for someone else's safety
Detection: Knowing when you've overstepped trust
Detection: Picking up on hints
Etiquette: Complimenting a lady on her outfit
Etiquette: Taking care of friends in financial need
Politics: Offering gifts in exchange for keeping secrets
Politics: Representing your house through the color of your outfit
Rhetoric: Self-deprecating comparison to your dog
Seduction: Nothing you haven't seen before

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Andaris: Ericor's Elegance
NPC: Ericor Edderick: Enthusiastic clothier
Valeria: V for short
Valeria: Marked by Zanik
Valeria: Lives in Andaris
Valeria: Still keeps up with your sister
Valeria: Knows what you look like under your clothes
Valeria: Knows your feelings for Darcyanna Venora
Valeria: Can't be bribed into silence
Valeria: Will probably pay you back

Loot: Paid for Valeria's dress and shoes (-17gn 2sn 8cn) as well as his own outfit. Recorded in ledger for Zi'da 717.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Positive, please! Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: Nope
Velanie Krome
Skill Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Wearing the same dress to two events isn't done
Politics: Delicately explaining that your funds are limited
Seduction: Charming a seller aids business
Seduction: Flirtatious greetings
Seduction: Clever flirtation
Intelligence: Using flirtatious wit to gain information
Politics: Representing your house through the colour of your outfit
Politics: Heading off rumours before they can begin
Rhetoric: Leaving no room for interpretation
Rhetoric: Using allusions to the past to gain the upper hand
Intimidation: Making threats you intend to carry out
Deception: Keeping secrets

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Ericor's Elegance (Andaris)
NPC - Ericor Edderick: Charming
Caius Gawyne: Returned from Viden in Ymiden 717
Caius Gawyne: Makes posters
Lord Pretty Boy: Nickname for Caius
Caius Gawyne: Works for the Rynmere Gazette
Caius Gawyne: Studies in Rynmere University
Caius Gawyne: Darcyanna Venora's hero
Caius Gawyne: Has serious feelings for Darcy
Caius Gawyne: Descendant of Ziell
Caius Gawyne: Tried to gift Val an outfit

Loot: Dress and shoes, a la a "loan" from Caius
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Positive, please! Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Last edited by Caius Gawyne on Sun Jan 21, 2018 1:16 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 392
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Quio
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Jan 21, 2018 4:17 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Between Ne'haer and Rhakros] Never Starve Again I.
City/Area: Haha, between the territories of Ne'haer and Rhakros. Sort of like, really down south past Ne'haer, near the southern tip of the western continent.
Notes/Warnings: Nope. It's a skill thread, so I hope it's not too boring. I personally love survival-based stuff, but ya know, to each their own. Also, this is part one of a series. Not sure how long the series will be.

Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE (6 for a solo)--
Field craft: Knapping a stone tool to make it sharp
Field craft: A coarse whetstone smooths and a polished whetstone sharpens
Field craft: Using rocks as whetstones to hone a stone tool
Field craft: Making a simple hand drill
Field craft: Starting a fire with a hand drill
Blades: Dagger: Using a knife as a tool rather than a weapon

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
NPC: Elja Raj'ryn
Elja: Si'tony's cousin
NPC: Pike Tora'ouj
Pike: Elja's human promised one

Loot: None really. Quio got a neat little stone knife out of it and a hand drill but he'll only be using them in related memory threads, nothing I'll have to add to his CS.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion, but like, probably none. He's just hanging in the woods.
Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Jan 21, 2018 6:01 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Not(h) a problem
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: swearing and stuff
Requested Rewards:
Zipper
Lores
Business Management: Delegating an urgent task to an employee
Business Management: Demanding proper conduct from an employee
Business Management: The importance of maintaining brand reputation
Business Management: Swallowing your pride to fix a problem
Business Management: Understanding the viewpoint of an employee
Politics: A ghost without an identity does not exist in the eyes of the law
Politics: Keeping your superiors assuaged
Politics: Managing assets who are fighting each other
Politics: Waiting out the crisis
Tactics: Letting one problem solve another
Gangui: A beast of twisted logic
Gangui: Demands to be spoken to nicely

Gangui
Business Management: The value of gold
Business Management: Investing for the future.
Politics: The amorality of the bureaucracy
Leadership: Standing up to your superiors
Business Management: Shouldering the financial risk
Politics: Doing the right thing can be costly
Business Management: Honor in business
Politics: Asserting your position
Discipline: Steeling one’s nerves in the face of magic.
Zipper: Can conjure stone walls instantly.
Zipper: Though she can be a bitch, is not devoid of reason.
Zipper: Hiding abilities from Gangui
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: General Negative for both for disturbing the neighbours? >_> A bigger chunk of negative points, if possible, towards Zipper for shouldering the perceived blame of making a monumentally bad call of issuing a 10k bounty by her superiors and colleagues both in Foster's and back in the main city.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Caius Gawyne
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Jan 21, 2018 1:15 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: When words fail, there is always music
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nah. We're just dancing and discussing our relationship. NBD.

Requested Rewards:
Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge (8+1=9):
Dancing: (Im)Proper hand positions
Dancing: Watching other dancers for clues
Dancing: Relaxing for more natural movement
Detection: Signs of withdrawal
Detection: Taking queues from your surroundings
Leadership: Taking lead on the dance floor
Leadership: Making relationship decisions
Politics: Being seen with your significant other
Politics: Courting: Making a romantic relationship official

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Darcy: Is way more comfortable in social situations than you
Darcy: Is quite thrilled to court you, officially
Darcy: Baked goods: Inside innuendo

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Positive, please! Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: Nope
Darcyanna Venora
Skill Knowledge:
Politics: Playing the part
Politics: Talking of official things
Leadership: Guiding to the correct decision maker
Resistance: Coping with the mild symptoms of withdrawal
Dancing: Elbows up, chin high
Dancing: Muscle memory goes a long way
Linguistics: Rakahi Pidgin (Qes=Yes)

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius: Wants to make things official
Caius: Courting you...for now
Caius: Wants to meet the parents
Caius: Makes you swoon. Oops.

Location: Umbridge
Location: Warren’s End

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Positive, please! Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Kirei Qe'Azour
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Jan 21, 2018 7:42 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Comfort Food
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:


Skill Knowledge

Cooking: Technique; Boiling; is cooking something in boiling liquid, this method is used for making stews and soups, cooking vegetables, hard boiling eggs, etc.
Cooking: Technique; Simmering; is cooking something in liquid that is just below the boiling point
Cooking: Simmering is a slower, more gentle method of cooking food than boiling; it is suited for delicate foods such as fish which may break apart when boiled, meats that are simmered remain moist and tender while boiled meats can become dry and tough due to the heat of the boiling liquid
Cooking: Technique; Steaming; this technique uses steam to cook something, the ingredients are placed in a bamboo container of some kind and suspended over a steaming pan as they cook
Cooking: Ingredient; Stock is a flavored liquid preparation that is used as the base of soups, stews, and other dishes. Making stocks involves simmering animal bones or meat, seafood, or vegetables in water or wine, and adding mirepoix, herbs, and spices for additional flavor.
Baking: Chocolate work and sugar work are difficult techniques that require a lot of skill


Non Skill Knowledge


Andiron: likes to challenge himself
Andiron: often pushes himself farther than he should
Andiron: tends to get frustrated when he pushes himself too far and fails

Elyari: has a huge amount of patience
Elyari: cares a great deal about her apprentices


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Navyri
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Jan 21, 2018 11:11 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: No Salvation
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: There is some violence, but it's not too graphic imo. Otherwise, this thread was very... relaxing to write, especially the beginning. I enjoyed looking into my character's psyche and kind of figuring out what she craves, and then playing around with some of her fears and seeing how they manifest. I hope you enjoy it.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A - Navyri does not have Nyvora or Dreamwalking.
Loot: 10xp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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