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Kasoria
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Apr 10, 2018 6:03 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: IV. Tidying Up
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence and Shenigans, Oh My...

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Absorb the Blow and Retaliate
Blades (Karambit): Disemboweling
Blades (Karambit): Not Ideal for Parrying or Blocking Another Blade
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Kidney Punch
Interrogation: Offering False Hope (Better Than None at All)
Intimidation: Projecting an Air of Indifference to Suffering


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Badly bruised left forearm
Renown: Oh yeah, once word gets around
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
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Noth
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Posts: 814
Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2016 4:51 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Monster
Renown: -370
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:25 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Out on Business
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Remarkably, none.
Requested Rewards:


Ryder
Knowledge:
Tactics: Examining an area for weakness
Tactics: Waiting for the right moment to speak
Tactics: Securing an area
Tactics: Making Mental Defense Plans
Discipline: Showing loyalty
Discipline: Waiting patiently
Discipline: Doing the job asked of you
Discipline: Maintaining a strong work ethic

Loot: A cool new sword, A Diri from that Chalice of Chance or whatever it's called, A job, a purpose in life.

Noth
Knowledge:
Business Management: Hiring Employees
Business Management: Securing a Business with Security
Business Management: Introducing New Employees to Other Employees
Business Management: Handing out a Signing Bonus
Tactics: Patching Up Holes in Walls so Passerby Can't See Inside
Tactics: Equipping Prominent Soldiers with Better Equipment
Leadership: Better Equipment Leads to More Loyalty
Leadership: Delegating Responsibility to Underlings

Loot: -450 gn for that cool sword (roughly, I think it was actually a bit less, but I don't mind paying a touch more), the security of knowing his facility is being watched over, the disappointment that his security officer immediately starts drinking random liquids around the room.


Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I doubt it for either of us.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Sephira
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:38 pm

Rewards Requested
Sephira

Thread Name:A Tiger Comes In
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Sephira meets Volker
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Attunement: Identifying the notes associated with death
Attunement: Identifying the notes associated with murder
Attunement: Identifying the notes associated with loneliness
Discipline: Keeping calm when bitten
Discipline: Standing your ground against a Harvester
Etiquette: Helping a stranger with directions
Intimidation: Using your words to threaten a stranger
Investigation: Asking questions where there is suspicion
Investigation: Using Attunement to discover more about a suspicious person

Non-Skill
Frequency - The killer on the street (Volker)
People: Volker : Hunter and Murderer
People: Volker : Animal-like when threatened

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Small bite on her ear
Renown: Maybe a small bit for assisting a stranger...and then threatening that stranger.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Volker

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Training: Pulling on a horse's reins
Discipline: Refraining from attacking an enemy's back
Deception: Hiding your true nature
Etiquette: Asking questions politely
Intimidation: Growling to scare others
Intimidation: Biting to frighten off threats
Socialization: Making idle conversation
Strength: Pulling a horse down the street
Tactics: Moving from place to place to avoid suspicion
Tactics: Noticing that an opponent is armored


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Negative perhaps? (Mistreating an animal and the Harvester appearing)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Arlo Creede
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Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Traveler
Renown: +518
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:48 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Change of Brace
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: A messy bun
Cosmetology: Hairstyles appropriate for exercises
Discipline: Enforced abstinence is difficult!
Discipline: No pain, no gain.
Endurance: Pushing through pain by focusing on the goal.
Endurance: Standing for the first time in over twenty days
Strength: Pulling yourself up on weak and shaky legs
Strength: Weight bearing onsplinted, broken legs

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Arlo

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Encourage and challenge
Caregiving: Needs to be tailored to the individual
Discipline: Enforced abstinence is difficult!
Discipline: Focus on the long term, not the right now
Persuasion: Say yes, but lay down rules
Persuasion: Explain why it's important
Psychology: Motivating someone by working with them.
Strength: Providing support to someone who is standing for the first time.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Dont think so
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Pegasus
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Profession: Telling Stories!
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Apr 10, 2018 3:11 pm

Locking this thread. New thread is located here

Peer reviews - please continue reviewing in this thread till it's done. Thank you
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