Ugh, they're so sweet, I think I might be sick! By which I mean, I love them very much and can I have them? Might they come to Viden after all? *Covets*
Arlo
Overview
XP: 15
Renown: No.
Renown: No.
Consequences
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Loot:
Loot:
- +1 North Pointing Gem
- +1 Glowing Staff
- +5 Books of Travelers' Tales
- +1 copy of "Geoupagus & The Two Naughty Granitees"
- +1 Quill of Engraving
- +1 Duplicity Suit
- +1 Cloak of Hiding
- RIng of Earth: Tier reward for Renown Tier 1.
Knowledge
- Skill:
- Detection: Recognising handwriting
- Navigation: Working out alternative routes.
- Navigation: Different kinds of charts
- Navigation: Ratio of different kinds of charts
- Navigation: Key for small details.
- Storytelling: Changing a story can make a new tale entirely
- Non-Skill:
- N/A
Comments
I'd encountered Vega before but never Arlo so I didn't really know what to expect from him. He has more seriousness to him that I really think balances Vega and I enjoy your writing style. Simple, not overly flowery but still conveying much. Just be mindful of slipping code tags and grammar/spelling errors and such.
Vega
Overview
XP: 15
Renown: +5 for good deeds
Renown: +5 for good deeds
Consequences
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Loot:
Loot:
- +1 Duplicity Dress
- +1 Cloak of Hiding
Knowledge
- Skill:
- Detection: Spotting when Arlo looks just too innocent
- Navigation: Working out alternative routes.
- Navigation: Different kinds of charts
- Navigation: Ratio of different kinds of charts
- Navigation: Key for small details.
- Non-Skill:
- N/A
Comments
Vega's such a sweet lil thing, I really enjoy her. Every time I encounter her, I enjoy what she comes out with, I really do. Given that all her gifts for Arlo required a lot of interaction with NPCs, I've assumed that she'll have some renown because of it. No good deed goes unnoticed! On a side note, I think "From my freckles to my frowns" is my new favourite phrase. Although "Audrae's skimpy knickers" is up there too.
If you think that I missed anything or you have any queries about your grade then don't hesitate to PM me!