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Tue Jun 20, 2017 9:11 am

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Threads: Each player must write at minimum 1500 per thread.

Solos: You may choose 6 Skill Knowledge from your thread. For every post made after the first page, you gain an additional skill knowledge for a maximum of 15 total skill knowledge. Auto 10 points upon completion no matter what.

Collaboration Threads: You may choose 8 Skill Knowledge from your thread after you've made a total of 3 posts. For every post made after that, you gain an additional skill knowledge. Auto 15 points upon completion no matter what.

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If you're interested in participating in this beta test, feel free to PM me, letting me know that you would like to have your threads reviewed in this proposed format. Any threads reviewed with this suggested system will not be regraded. Understand you will be stuck with what you get. But the fun part of it all is you get to decide what you get. So there's that.
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PegasusX
NymphX
DjinnX
IncubusX
FreyaX
MalcolmX
AlistairX
WendellX
AeodanX
EdaleneX
FaithX
PadraigX
KeeganX
Arwel KyricX
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AeonXX
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Kura WolfsdotterX
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Arlo CreedeXX
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Any participant of a thread may submit for their own rewards. However, as long as you get permission from all participants within the thread, you may also request for your partner(s) rewards as well. Please indicate that you received approval from your partner to post their rewards for them in your request.
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[b]Thread Name:[/b] (Name with link included)
[b]City/Area:[/b] (Where is this taken place in?)
[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Requested Rewards:[/b] 
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: (Yes/No)
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Tue Jun 20, 2017 1:00 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Haul Up The Spanker!
City/Area: Orm'del Sea
Notes/Warnings: Suggestive themes.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Detection: Difference Between Sleeping and Passed Out Drunk
  • Discipline: Duty Always Comes Before Pleasure
  • Negotiation: Trading A Kiss For Secrets
  • Seduction: Honest Admissions Can Be Enticing
  • Stealth: Holding Your Breath To Stay Quiet
  • Stealth: Using The Shadows To Hide
  • Haraji: Locked Freya In A Room Aboard Wendell's Ship
  • The White Raven: Introduce To The Crew
  • The White Raven: Wendell's Galleon
  • Wendell: Gentle With Freya After So Long Apart
  • Wendell: What was that he said?
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
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Aeodan
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Tue Jun 20, 2017 2:21 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Working Together Again
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Twins are 2cute
Requested Rewards: Please note, I was given permission to include Edalene's request here as well.
Knowledge:
Aeodan
  • Skill Knowledges
  • History: The Jourkadri tribes had a chiefdom-like structure
  • Linguistics: Studying language fragments to familiarize oneself with the language
  • Linguistics: Studying written languages allows for transcription
  • Linguistics: Using a reference material to decipher a new language
  • Linguistics: Runic languages use different techniques to denote specific concepts
  • Linguistics: Making connections between different languages to compare their similarities
  • Research: Cross-referencing makes cataloguing easier

    People/Place Knowledges
  • Neville de Bougervile: Professor of Linguistics in Rynmere
  • Edalene: Loves her job
  • Edalene: Loves helping her brother
  • Edalene: Often has many 'gentleman callers'

    Language Knowledge
  • Jourkadri Cuts: Carved on skeletal remains
  • Jourkadri Cuts: Used a mixture of script and runes
  • Jourkadri Cuts: Recorded a person's history on their bodies
Edalene
  • Skill Knowledges
  • History: Jourkadri skeletal remains contain written runes
  • History: The Jourkadri Tribes had a chiefdom-like structure
  • History: The Jourkadri used record-keeping on the skeletal remains of their citizens
  • History: CHL, the Jourkadri Man, is the first true specimen of the Jourkardi people
  • History: The Jourkadri prized knowledge over all else
  • Research: Cross-referencing makes cataloguing easier
  • Research: Using a template for uniform cataloguing

    People/Place Knowledges
  • Aeodan: Loves his sister
  • Aeodan: Innocent to a fault
  • Aeodan: Works for the Linguistics department

    Language Knowledge
  • Jourkadri Cuts: Carved on skeletal remains
  • Jourkadri Cuts: Used a mixture of script and runes
  • Jourkadri Cuts: Recorded a person's history on their bodies
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: I don't think so?
Devotion: Maybe Yvithia for Aeodan for trying to translate a new language
Collaboration: Yes
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Tue Jun 20, 2017 2:47 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Charting the Trajectory
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Skill Knowledges
  • Linguistics: Transcribing an alphabet to familiarize oneself
  • Linguistics: Studying runic languages by copying and comparing the runes
  • Linguistics: Making educated guesses on intent
  • Linguistics: Using Common to translate a related language
  • Linguistics: Finding similarities in language families
  • Research: Using a historical text to make connections

    People/Places Knowledge
  • Eastern Settlements: An amalgamation of Shore People and Sheoran refugees
  • Eastern Settlements: Cultural melting pot
  • Sheor: Kingdom on the Eastern Continent
  • Sheor: Tolerated magic
  • Sheoran Refugees: Tried to impose their culture on the Shore People
  • The Shore People: First inhabited the Eastern Settlements
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Tiredness from studying lol
Fame: I don't think so
Devotion: Yes, Yvithia
Collaboration: No
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Thu Jun 22, 2017 6:24 pm

Rewards Requested: Padraig
Thread Name: Best Laid Plans
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: noticing how others behave
Detection: miniscule facial expressions
Etiquette: Managing house guests
Negotiation: Give a little
Persuasion: There is strength in numbers
Persuasion: Explain your reasons
Socialization: Observations of group behaviour can aid understanding of dynamic

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: (Yes) - Confirming that Padraig is happy for me to put this request up on his behalf.

Rewards Requested: Faith
Thread Name: Best Laid Plans
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Behaviour when around the in laws
Logistics: Organising meals for a full household
Negotiation: State the non-negotiables
Negotiation: Giving in gracefully
Socialization: Chatting in a group
Socialization: Conversing with someone who is never quiet
Socialization: Answering questions

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: (Yes)
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Alistair
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Thu Jun 22, 2017 9:18 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Gaze
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: First person drivel
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledge
Meditation: Using nature to relax
Meditation: Remembering serene moments to herald calm

Very few knowledges. I just wrote it for the fun.

Misc Knowledge:
William Grayson: Buried
William Grayson: Mutual Past

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
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Alistair
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Thu Jun 22, 2017 9:32 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Windfall
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Strafing into a Spin
Acrobatics: Timing an Acrobatic Maneuver
Polearms: Spear - Using the Spear For Mobility
Polearms: Spear - Voiding
Polearms: Spear - Shadow Sweep
Polearms: Spear - Using the Spear Handle to Dodge

Other Knowledge:
Naerikk: Flapper-Slappers
Uthaldria: Marriage Norms
Rory: Keanu's Kindal
I Love the Wind

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Collaboration: Nah
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Alistair
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Thu Jun 22, 2017 9:38 pm

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Thread Name: Dancing With Shadows
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Shadowdancing
Polearms: Spear - Shadowdancing is focused on mobility, acrobatics, fluidity
Polearms: Spear - Scorpion's Sting
Polearms: Spear - Utilized for range
Acrobatics: Jumping Attack
Acrobatics: Evasion

Other Knowledge:
Keanu Ki'Lozdara: Blacksmith, Mage, Shadowdancer
Uthaldrian Fighting Styles
Uthaldria: Valley of Kings
The Pointy End: Smithy

Loot: Shadowsong, Masterwork Terrendyte/Beryllium Emerald Spear
-960 gn
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Collaboration: Nah
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Alistair
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Thu Jun 22, 2017 9:44 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: New Rain
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Even Stance
Polearms: Spear - Coordinating Magic and Shadowdancing
Polearms: Spear - Snakebite
Acrobatics: Spinning Turn
Acrobatics: Barrel Roll
Acrobatics: Recovering From a Roll

Other Knowledge:
Alistair: the Sunless
Keanu: Believes Every Session Must be a Battle

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Collaboration: Nah
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Aeodan
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Wed Jun 28, 2017 7:21 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Breaking the Barrier
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Linguistics: Determining language families by noting verbal similarities
    Negotiation: Carrying a bluff through
    Negotiation: Laying your options on the table
    Detection: Noting signs of respect in an opponent's face
    Philosophy: Democracy as a governmental form
    Detection: Using body language to determine hidden agendas

    Alexios Alexopolous: Captain of the Seventh Sun
    Alexios Alexopolous: Speaks Omyeric
    Alexios Alexopolous: Admires your drive

    Language: Omyeric
    Omyeric: Shares a family with Rakahi
Loot: Nothing for Aeodan, supplies and the text for the city.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Maybe positive for negotiating a mutual agreement?
Devotion: Yvithia for translating between to incompatible parties?
Collaboration: No
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