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Niv
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Review Request 2.1.3

Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:34 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: It Starts With A War Cry.
City/Area: Etzos(Fosters landing)
Notes/Warnings: Swear words
Requested Rewards:
Gangui
Philosophy: Anti Immortal
Philosophy: No sleep until emancipation
Philosophy: The Limits of Freedom
Rhetoric: A Free Idalos.
Rhetoric: Benevolent Immortals aren't actually benevolent.
Leadership: Tough Love
Leadership: Inspiring Courage
Discipline: Steel Your Nerves

Non-Skill Knowledges
Niv: Mortified by Fire
Niv: Has some emotional baggage she won’t talk about.
Niv: Hates Illinis, Shadow ladies and Slavers

Niv
Discipline: Steel Your Nerves.
Meditation: swearing is cathartic
Persuasion: Planting small seeds to open someones mind.
Philosophy: Side with Benevolent Immortals
Philosophy: Acknowledging different belief systems
Rhetoric: Knowing when someone doesn't know what their talking about :P
Stealth: Gentle steps.


Non-Skill Knowledges
Gangui: Can be wise sometimes.

Loot: nope
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: Reveiwers choice
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Niv on Wed Jan 24, 2018 4:36 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Vega
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Review Request 2.1.3

Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:41 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A fox and an elephant sitting in a tree......
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:

Carpentry: Choosing the right tools for the job beforehand, helps
Carpentry: Check that your pattern goes with the grain
Carpentry: Clean off regularly while engraving to avoid unwanted bumps and marks
Carpentry: Small details can be added later
Carpentry: Getting proportions right is important.
Persuasion: Reminding your father that he doesn't need to charge off and thump your boyfriend.


Loot: Ledger is updated
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nurp
Collaboration: Yes
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Last edited by Vega on Fri Jan 26, 2018 10:59 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Nathan Wulfgang
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Review Request 2.1.3

Wed Jan 24, 2018 4:46 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Calm After the Storm
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Usage of swears in the earlier posts
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (Skill and Non-Skill)
  • Wulfgang Family Secrets: The Entity
  • Wulfgang Family Secrets: Assets
  • Leadership: How to lead a succesful meeting
  • People: Anna Wulfgang-Flockheart(NPC) - Wife
  • People: Thea Wulfgang (NPC) - sister
  • People: Alex Wulfgang (NPC)- Right hand man
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
 ! Message from: Pegasus
Reviewed!!
Last edited by Nathan Wulfgang on Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:08 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sephira
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Review Request 2.1.3

Wed Jan 24, 2018 1:08 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Earth, Wind, and Fire
City/Area: Scalvoris (Elements Hall)
Notes/Warnings:Sephira goes to the Elements headquarters to join the military.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledge
Discipline: Respecting Superiors
Discipline: Resisting the urge to retaliate
Discipline: Remaining calm in chaotic surroundings
Etiquette: Being polite to strangers
Etiquette: Choose your battles carefully
Etiquette: Sometimes being agreeable gets results

Location Knowledge
Location: Elements Hall

People Knowledge
People: Ms. Macklin - Receptionist at Elements Hall
People: Su'an - Defiance Mage
People: Su'an - Flame Assistant

Loot: Job with the Elements (Pre-Approved)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Up to the reviewer
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Nathan Wulfgang
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Review Request 2.1.3

Wed Jan 24, 2018 4:08 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The First Name on the List: Alfred "Knucklehead"
City/Area: Rharne, Dust Quarter
Notes/Warnings: Mild Violence and several foul language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (Skill & Non-Skill)
  • Unarmed Combat: Using the Enviroment to Your Advantage
  • Unarmed Combat: Aim for Your Enemies Weak Spot
  • Unarmed Combat: Jab stance
  • Unarmed Combat: Throwing a hook
  • Unarmed Combat: Landing an Uppercut
  • Unarmed Combat: Using Your Body as a Weapon
  • Unarmed Combat: Knee strike & Elbow strike
  • Intelligence: A Good Intel is a Powerful Weapon
  • Negotiation: Using the Situation to Make the Deal Goes in Your Favor
  • People: Alfred "Knucklehead" (NPC) - Business Rival
  • People: Freddy (NPC), Sarah (NPC) - Alfred's children
  • People: Duncan (NPC) - Womanizer
  • People: Lyn Roseberg (NPC) - Leader of Roseberg Family
  • People: Leon (NPC) - Lyn's right hand man
  • People: Paulo Donovan (NPC) - Weapon and gadget enthusiast
  • People: Anton Donovan (NPC) - Fighter
  • People: Leonard Donovan (NPC) - Ship captain
  • People: Jake Donovan (NPC) - Hitman
  • Rharne: Behind the Scenes - The Kingpin is No Mere Legend
  • Rharne: Behind the Scenes - The Kingpin can Hide From the Immortals
Loot: nels, equipments, NPCs (Donovans)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative, fighting in the market
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Nathan Wulfgang on Thu Jan 25, 2018 6:34 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Sephira
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Review Request 2.1.3

Wed Jan 24, 2018 5:47 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Window of Opportunity
City/Area: Scalvoris (The Four in Hand casino)
Notes/Warnings: Sephira works with the Land Troops to discover a couple of whiskey thieves.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Phasing can only be accomplished at short range
Rupturing: Sound cannot be heard through Phasing yet
Rupturing: Be mindful of overstepping
Attunement: Can be used to detect occupants in a room
Endurance: Searching all trial for the culprits
Investigation: Deducing that the thieves may not be patrons.

Non Skill Knowledge

Location (The Four in Hand): Casino, Restaurant, Inn, and Bar all in one
Location (The Four in Hand): Has a great variety of patrons.
The Elements: Land Troops: Act as city guard and militia
The Elements: Land Troops: A vital branch of the Elements.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive hopefully- Working with the Land Troops to apprehend thieves.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Navyri
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Profession: Thief
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Review Request 2.1.3

Wed Jan 24, 2018 6:09 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Play Ball
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Downward Facing Dog
Acrobatics:How to Do a Cartwheel
Acrobatics: The Warrior Pose
Discipline: How to Stay Focused in Hot Weather
Dancing: Move Without Inhibition
Strength: What is Muscle Fatigue
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, sore muscles
Fame: Rather not.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Ellen'wyn
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Profession: Huntress
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Review Request 2.1.3

Thu Jan 25, 2018 5:06 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Kestrel and Crow
City/Area: Etzos' Underground
Notes/Warnings: Ellen and Noth meet for the first time. It starts off rocky between them but ends up smoothing over.
Requested Rewards:

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges: 11 total possible (6 posts)
Navigation: Asking for directions
Navigation: No noticeable directional signs underground
Navigation: Being underground is disorienting
Endurance: Recovering from a blow to the head
Tactics: Knowing when you're outgunned
Tactics: Covering all of the angles
Tactics: Sizing up your opponent
Etiquette: Some questions are offensive
Strength: Fighting against the grip of your opponent
Discipline: Managing your fear
Discipline: Focusing despite claustrophobia

Non-skill Knowledges:
The Prince of Eternal Mercies: Half Avriel
The Prince of Eternal Mercies: Intimidating figure
The Prince of Eternal Mercies: He's not so bad
Location: Etzos
Location: (Etzos) The Underground

Noth

Skill Knowledges: 11 total possible (6 posts)
Detection: Recognizing a Foreign Accent
Intimidation: The Silent Treatment
Intimidation: Making Someone Walk
Deception: Being "Friendly"
Leadership: Calling Off Attack
Leadership: Keeping Guards Posted

Non-skill Knowledges:
Ellen'wyn: Fellow Halfvriel
Ellen'wyn: Wandered into the Underground

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Grader's discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Ellen'wyn on Sat Jan 27, 2018 6:09 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.3

Thu Jan 25, 2018 6:19 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Maiden Voyage
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 knowledge)
Seafaring: The Boom must be avoided when it swings
Seafaring: Tack and gybe both mean turning into the wind. Tack is turning the front, gybe is turning the back of the boat.
Seafaring: Ballywrinkle protects the sails
Seafaring: Front of the ship is fore, back is aft.
Seafaring: Port and starboard
Navigation: Points of sail denote where the ship is in relation to wind direction.
Navigation: Sailing in irons means sailing into the wind
Navigation: Running means sailing with the wind behind you
Navigation: The "no go zone" is 45 degrees either side of "in irons"
Navigation: Sailing beam-reach is when the wind is at a 90 degree angle to the line of the ship.
Navigation: Sailing broad-reach is when the wind is 45 degrees either side of running.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes


Arlo

Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 knowledge max)
Seafaring: The Boom must be avoided when it swings
Seafaring: Tack and gybe both mean turning into the wind. Tack is turning the front, gybe is turning the back of the boat.
Seafaring: Ballywrinkle protects the sails
Seafaring: Front of the ship is fore, back is aft.
Seafaring: Port and starboard
Navigation: Points of sail denote where the ship is in relation to wind direction.
Navigation: Sailing in irons means sailing into the wind
Navigation: Running means sailing with the wind behind you
Navigation: The "no go zone" is 45 degrees either side of "in irons"
Navigation: Sailing beam-reach is when the wind is at a 90 degree angle to the line of the ship.
Navigation: Sailing broad-reach is when the wind is 45 degrees either side of running.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame:
Collaboration: Yes
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Last edited by Arlo Creede on Mon Jan 29, 2018 11:51 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.3

Thu Jan 25, 2018 7:09 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Afterglow
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge: (3 posts = 8 knowledge)
Acrobatics: Jumping into someone else's arms
Persuasion: Really, it's a birth trial gift.
Strength: Holding yourself off the ground in someone else's arms.

Loot: +1 bracelet
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes


Arlo

Knowledge: (3 posts = 8 knowledge max)
Acrobatics: Keeping your balance when someone jumps into your arms.
Persuasion: It's not a birth-trial gift, really.
Strength: Holding someone off the ground.


Loot: Ledger updated
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Give a gift +2
Collaboration: Yes
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