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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Feb 18, 2018 12:50 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Fire Within
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Doing what you believe to be right.
Discipline: Ignoring your emotions
Discipline: Sometimes, being a stubborn pain in the neck helps you do what you have to
Endurance: A long journey
Endurance: Walking in the bitter cold.
Navigation: Using landmarks to plan your direction


Loot: Loss: 1 bracelet :( 1 stuffed bear :(
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Feb 18, 2018 4:59 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Turkey Wars
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: The usual - swearing
Requested Rewards:
Gangui
Skill Knowledges
Persuasion: Honor codes as a platform
Persuasion: Evidence through past victories
Persuasion: Detecting logical fallacies in arguments
Intimidation: Violently grasping of the shirt
Rhetoric: The future is now
Leadership: Taking command silently
Leadership: Taking accountability for one’s own words
Leadership: Making the tough decisions that some may not agree with
Persuasion: The proof that is martyrdom
Persuasion: Framing an argument to inspire noble courage

Non-Skill
Zipper: Spies on her allies and their families
Zipper: Evil Machination
Zipper: Has no emotion

Zipper
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Business Management: Avoid giving unnecessary information to stakeholders
Intelligence: Keeping informed on even minor local developments
Intelligence: Keeping informed on the allies of your allies
Intelligence: Some don’t take too kindly about being spied upon
Intelligence: The web of Foster’s Landing
Intelligence: Using rumours and hearsay to your advantage
Tactics: Deploying the absurd to stall and delay
Tactics: Employing mockery to fluster and denigrate
Tactics: Guiding the situation towards a physical confrontation
Tactics: Playing to the audience

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Positive for Gangui openly calling out crimes, rallying the young, and putting himself on the line for his beliefs
Negative for Zip for use of magic, admission of lack of honor, freakish exposure to impressionable youths, and being an all-around bitch about this whole thing
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Feb 18, 2018 12:38 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Making Friends
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Blades: Sword: How to remain in ready position while sitting
Intelligence: Let someone talk, they tell a lot
Intelligence: Consider how much you tell of yourself in order to provoke discussion
Intelligence: Information can be gathered in a lighthearted manner.
Investigation: Stating clues
Investigation: Putting together statements to determine patterns of behaviour
Investigation: Understanding motives for behaviour, both stated and not

Roland: Met him in an Inn where he said he was expecting you.
Roland: Comes from Egilrun
Roland: Bored of his "old life"
Roland: Doesn't believe in coincidence
Roland: Parents are glassblowers
Roland: Invited you to the land of the stupid people
Roland: Drinks brandy
Roland: Eats pies.

Loot: Ledger Updated
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Roland

Knowledge:
Appraisal: Checking jewelry for inscriptions
Appraisal: Guessing a profession from ordinary details
Ettiquette: Standing from a table to greet a lady
Ettiquette: Offering refreshments to guests
Ettiquette: Listening to someone speak without interrupting
Discipline: Not taking slights personally
Mathematics: Tallying a bill in your head
Negotiation: Getting extra service for full payment up front

Loot: Ledger updated
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Feb 18, 2018 4:08 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Cold Fledging
City/Area: Etzos and surrounding lands
Notes/Warnings: minorly detailed description of a chicken being slaughtered.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Ranged: Shortbow: relaxed and at attention
  • Ranged: Shortbow: waiting to draw
  • Hunting: lure the prey to you
  • Stealth: stay still, stay quiet
  • Stealth: few targets look up
  • Butchery: boiling water equals easy plucking
  • Location: the Chopping Block
  • Farlin(NPC): appreciates punctuality
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: maybe minor dehydration from cold, otherwise no.
Fame: I don't think so?
Collaboration: solo
Magic EXP: no
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Jonathan
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Review Request 2.1.3

Sun Feb 18, 2018 9:47 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Topics of the Sword
City/Area: Andaris’ Barracks
Notes/Warnings: Some foul language. This is just a training flashback and some character development from when Jonathan was younger and planning on becoming a Squire. I’ll probably do writeups of the NPCs involved to use them some more.
Requested Rewards:

Jonathan

Skill Knowledges: 6 total
Blades (Longsword): Keep your feet moving
Blades (Longsword): Parrying a downward swing
Blades (Longsword): Let your arms absorb the attack
Endurance: Having the wind knocked out of you
Strength: Using your size against a smaller opponent
Tactics: Protect your flank

Non-skill Knowledges:
Location: (Andaris) Barracks

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Maybe some positive points for helping the unconscious Squire.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Feb 19, 2018 3:40 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Black and Blue
City/Area: Fort Berengar, Endor
Notes/Warnings: There may be a little bit of hinting. This thread fades to black at this end.
Requested Rewards - Velaine:
Skill Knowledge:
  • Discipline: Restraining Your Worries
    Discipline: Breaking Off a Kiss to Talk
    Discipline: Stop Overthinking
    Psychology: Using Touch to Reassure Someone
    Psychology: Difficult to Apply On Somoeone You Are Invested In
    Psychology: Dealing With Grief
    Psychology: Trying To Make the Mood Lighter
    Psychology: Feelings Are Confusing and Maddening
    Seduction: A Deeper Kiss For A Deeper Relationship
    Seduction: Letting Your Lover Take the Lead
    Seduction: Using One Word To Convey Interest
Non-Skill Knowledges
  • Endor Mines: Violence and Fighting Are Not Uncommon
    Endor Mines: Dangerous Place
    Endor Mines: Plagued by Fear Feeders
    Endor Mines: Lost Nine Men in Two Seasons
    Endor Mines: May Be in Trouble?
    Fear Feeders: Has Noxious Gas
    Fear Feeders: Can Cause Hallucination
    Nathaniel Endor: Has a Dangerous Job
    Nathaniel Endor: Can Be Vulnerable
    Nathaniel Endor: Cares About His Men
    Nathaniel Endor: Says You Are a Woman He Loves
    Nathaniel Endor: Promises Never To Leave You
    Nathaniel Endor: Has Power Over You
    Nathaniel Endor: Spent a Night Together
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Requested Rewards - Nathaniel:
Skill Knowledge (11):
  • Psychology: Comfort in Familiar Contact
    Psychology: Bearing the Grief of Death
    Psychology: The Cracks Bring out an Inner Emotional Self
    Tactics: Removing a Distractions
    Tactics: Sharing the Burden of the Fear Feeders
    Seduction: Carelessness in Removing a Shirt
    Seduction: The Need is Intense in Vulnerable Situations
    Seduction: The Affirmation of Love
    Discipline: Willing to Stop if Told to Stop
    Etiquette: Defending a Woman's Honor with a Large Body
    Strength: Picking up a Woman Wedding Style
Non-Skill Knowledges
  • Velaine: Worried Like a Wife
    Velaine: Seems to be Dressed in Nightgowns Often
    Velaine: Spent the Night Together
    Velaine: Nate's First Love
    Velaine: How Power Over You
    Velaine: There for You
    Pledge: Will Always Come Back to Velaine
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: NA
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:02 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Open seas, dark skies
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:[/googlefont]
Vega

Knowledge: (6 posts =11 knowledge)
Acrobatics: Pushing someone out of the way and throwing yourself backwards
Detection: Noting changes in weather by smell
Endurance: Head pain
Navigation: Identifying sheltered spots
Navigation:Navigating by sight
Navigation: Minute adjustments in navigated path
Navigation: Determining wind direction
Seafaring: The smell of a storm
Seafaring: In a storm, get out of dock
Seafaring: Negotiating out of a dock
Seafaring:Heaving to in a storm


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Vega has a thump on the head and a mild concussion. For the rest of the season she'll get headaches etc
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Arlo

Knowledge:
Koriel ability: Create a wave of up to 15 foot, but it's tiring.
Navigation: Identifying sheltered spots
Navigation:Navigating by sight
Navigation: Minute adjustments in navigated path
Navigation: Determining wind direction
Seafaring: The smell of a storm
Seafaring: In a storm, get out of dock
Seafaring: Negotiating out of a dock
Seafaring:Heaving to in a storm
Strength: Hauling an anchor
Strength: Fighting a ship's wheel


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Saving Vega's life against the wave by tying her up, treating her wounds & saving the ship with mark abilities.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Review Request 2.1.3

Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:32 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Making New Friends
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Tactics: making enemies fight 1v1
Tactics: weakening enemies with magic
Tactics: defeating the strongest first
Business Management: Intimidating the competition
Business Management: Promoting Respect for the Boss
Business Management: Recruiting Members through alternative methods
Business Management: Leadership through intimidation
Business Management: Respecting the Hierarchy

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: -2 use of magic, -5 arcane torture
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Feb 20, 2018 12:50 am

Sephira
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Into the Storm
City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund
Notes/Warnings: Lavana and Sephira rescue a couple from their storm damaged home
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Moving a body on a stretcher
Strength: Removing rubble from a home
Endurance: Working in bad weather
Medicine: Bandaging a flesh wound
Medicine: Keeping head injury victim from moving too much
Blades (Saber): Keeping your weapon oiled and clean
Tactics: Calling for help when you can't do it alone
Tactics: Using triage to deduce victims with the highest level of need.
Discipline: Staying calm when dealing with hysterical victims
Psychology: Holding hands up passively to keep others calm
Etiquette: Giving Credit when credit is due

Non-Skill Knowledge
People: Lavana Tharn : Introduced herself as Alvana Thorn
People: Lavana Tharn : May possibly be insane
People: Lavana Tharn: Cracks jokes at bad times
People: Lavana Tharn: Helpful when asked

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: + 10 for rescuing Scalv Storm victims. Check 8th of Cylus on Calander for Fame reference
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:Nah, didn't use it much



Lavana
Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Into the Storm
City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund
Notes/Warnings: Lavana and Sephira rescue a couple from their storm damaged home
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength; Moving Broken Boards
Discipline; Staying, Not Running
Endurance; Carrying On Despite Minor Fatigue
Acrobatics; Walking backwards carrying a load.
Blades Claymore; Half Swording
Blades Claymore; Using The Pommel
Blades Claymore; Power Cutting
Leadership; Taking control of a bad situation
Leadership; Coming up with a plan to overcome an obstacle.
Tactics; Laughing At Death, Makes Things Easier To Cope.
Tactics; Using Human Resources to get preparations for help.

Non-Skill Knowledges
People: Sephira : Mage
People: Sephira : Makes Portals
People: Sephira : Noodly of Arm but Strong of Spirit
Faction: Elements: Military of Scalvoris

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: + 10 for rescuing Scalv Storm victims. Check 8th of Cylus on Calander for Fame reference
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Tue Feb 20, 2018 5:24 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Unemployed
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Blades: Diagonal Slash
Blades: Horizontal Slash
Blades: Basic Thrust
Endurance: Fighting Through the Cold
Intimidation: Violent Displays of Anger
Strength: Lifting a Sword

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor bruises.
Fame: Negative (fighting, etc.)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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