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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 23, 2018 7:48 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: We all need a Gentle Push
City/Area: Yaralon, The Spines
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:

Necromancy: Ability - Restore
Necromancy: Repairing damaged flesh takes time
Necromancy: Restore only brings back flesh, not blood
Necromancy: Live subjects are better for learning new techniques
Necromancy: Practicing Restore on several limbs builds familiarity with the technique
Animal Training: Using colors to give commands

Non-skill:
Wells can be made from Flaying victims
Massibex Hounds are susceptible to color commands
Necromancers can trap souls

Loot: A well made from a flayed victim {Abberyte}
Injuries/Overstepping: (N/A)
Renown: Up to reviewer
Collaboration: (No)

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes) Necromancy
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Competent {75}
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: Yes, as with these knowledges I'll have the required amount to step into Expert tier.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Sun Sep 23, 2018 9:17 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Drawing Blood
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Drawing blood with a needle
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Endurance: Dealing with blood loss
Endurance: Getting pricked by needles
Discipline: Staying still while blood is drawn
Discipline: Fighting to remain in control
Discipline: Following through with your commitment
Defiance: The spark is scared of dying

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Light headedness – blood loss
Renown: No
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only -
Magic EXP: Yes Defiance
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: 25
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: yes
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Mon Sep 24, 2018 1:12 am

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Thread Name: All of Them
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill
Research: starting with the familiar
Research: read the whole book
Research: should take notes
Research: searching a text for information
Research: handle books with respect and care
Discipline: overcoming fear of a new place

Non-skill
Geography: the world map
Geography: the shape of the continents
Geography: location of Scalvoris
Geography: location of Rynmere
Geography: location of Viden
Immortal: Cassion
Cassion Domains: Travel, adventure, story, and hunger
Cassion: constantly on the move
Cassion: passes for human
Cassion: works with cooking but not baking.
Location: Public Library
NPC: Rafe, Scalvoris Librarian


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping:No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Mon Sep 24, 2018 7:07 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Sweet Sorrow
City/Area: Westguard, Outskirts of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Strike three! Thanks for sticking with it, forgive me this last part, I'm really not good at... couples.

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Discipline: Denying Yourself Peace, So Others May Have It
Discipline: Trying To Avoid An Argument
Intimidation: The Dad Voice
Tactics: Shield Wall
Teaching: Keeping a Student's Attention
Teaching: Book Learnin' Balancing Physical Training


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Book: Mortal Men, Undying Glory: A Military History of Etzos, by Rundon Buxlay
Westguard: Caravans Leaving or Passing Through Every Few Trials
NPC Jessye: Tired Of Raising Martyn Alone
NPC Martyn: Not Above Manipulating His Parents (or trying to)


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Mon Sep 24, 2018 8:20 pm

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Thread Name: Food, Glorious Food!
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Ehm. Eh.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Sep 25, 2018 3:05 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Nuisance.
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: An old memory at the Scalvoris Harbor during her visit to Scalvoris years ago. A short thread, mostly to explore her relationship with her Tarouz familiar, Curio. It was kind cute and it was easy to write.
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Knowledge:

Navigation: Consider Shoreline Conditions
Navigation: Be Mindful of Weather During Travel
Navigation: How to Use a Compass
Navigation: How to Read a Map
Navigation: Notate You Map if Needed
Discipline: How to Hide Minor Pain

Location: Scalvoris Town
Scalvoris Town: Harbor

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No

Domain Magic Only - Ignore if not applicable
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) Please specify the type of domain magic xp.(ie: Defiance)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?:
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?:
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Sep 25, 2018 6:50 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Faith and Magic
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Magic scribes itself into skin
Psychology: Evading by distraction
Seduction: Innuendos in words
Discipline: Stay focused
Persuasion: Promise safety
Interrogation: Ask directly
Teaching: Difference in symbols
Discipline: Don't take things personally
Etiquette: Don't stare at people
Detection: Magic effect on body can look like wounds

Non-skill
Jonathan Burr: Must be mage
Jonathan Burr: Might be into men
Jonathan Burr: Strange wound-like effects on his body
The Faithful: Not seen so favourably

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Probably none
Collaboration: Yes, but the other player is no longer on ST?
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Sep 25, 2018 7:34 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Over the garden wall
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Eh.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
-Stealth: Loud noises can alarm patrols
-Stealth: Crouching run to move fast and remain out of sight
-Climbing: Ivy on a wall makes it impossible to find purchase
-Climbing: Hauling yourself up a wall
-Climbing: Can ivy support a man’s weight?
-Climbing: Tangles in the ivy provide footholds

Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Tue Sep 25, 2018 7:35 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Past the guards
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Ehh.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: not moving makes you harder to spot in the dark
Stealth: dark on dark is hard to see
Stealth: people rarely look up
Stealth: guards are easier to avoid when they are tired
Climbing: clambering up a drain pipe
Climbing: using wall ornaments to scale a building

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: IDK
Collaboration: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.7

Wed Sep 26, 2018 4:05 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: How to Lose a Fight in Five Breaks
City/Area: New Haven, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Violence (not graphic)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Polearms (Quarterstaff): Blocking a Two Handed Strike
  • Polearms (Quarterstaff): Two Handed Parry
  • Polearms (Quarterstaff): Strengthening Your Defense
  • Polearms (Quarterstaff): Putting the Staff Between Yourself and the Aggressor
  • Polearms (Quarterstaff): Windmill Strike
  • Defiance: Allow the Wind to Guide Your Movements
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Doubtful of overstepping, but injuries are definite. Likely no scarring or anything, and also this was a memory thread, but Quiet got hit.
Renown: +10 for participating in a public fight
Collaboration: No

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Magic EXP: Yes - Defiance
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: Competent, but if not, please PM me so I can clarify the situation.
Are you requesting domain magic level up approval?: No
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