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Caius Gawyne
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 5:25 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Home / Work
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Feels and stuff.

Requested Rewards:
Caius Gawyne

Skill Knowledge (8+1=9):
Deception: Changing the subject
Discipline: Burying the hurt
Leadership: The power of delegation
Leadership: Paying for services well-rendered
Research: Finding the oldest, most reliable source
Research: Cross-referencing information
Research: Questioning absolutes
Research: Separating truth from folklore
Research: Keeping an objective mind with subjective material

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Religion: Immortals: Daia, Immortal of Companionship, Prosperity, Tailoring, and Dance
Religion: Immortals: Daia, the Immortal who died
Religion: Immortals: Ziell's love for Daia
Religion: Immortals: Ralaith, Immortal of Wisdom, Bitterness, Time, and Bears
Religion: Immortals: Ziell, Ralaith, and Daia's strange relationships
Religion: Originals: Those who came before the Immortals
Religion: Originals: Creators of the Immortals?
Location: Rented Home in Andaris (above Ink and Prophet)
Darcyanna Venora: Pours herself into her music
Darcyanna Venora: Looks perfect in your home

Loot: -6gn for friends moving a piano
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.

Darcyanna Venora

Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Don’t falter, don’t let your pain show
Politics: Bravery in the face of adversity
Musical Instrument (Piano): Playing whilst singing
Musical Instrument (Piano): Key changes
Musical Instrument (Piano): Writing for lyrical accompliment
Musical Instrument (Piano): Testing for tuning

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Sneakily moved you to your new home
Caius Gawyne: Has some cool friends
NPC: Lly’en - Sev’ryn
Location: Home in Andaris (above the Ink and Prophet)

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.
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Sephira
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 6:20 pm

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Thread Name: A Flame in the Dark
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Sephira works with the Flame Troops to apprehend a criminal.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: The Pull of the Spark
Rupturing: New Mutation: Realizes emotion can effect her magic
Rupturing: The Use of Skystepping
Deception: Lying to get answers
Endurance: Chasing a Criminal
Detection: Realizing the criminal had fled

Non-Skill Knowledge
Faction: The Flame Troops : Specialist branch of the Elements

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive for catching a criminal necromancer
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP:Yes
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Kovic
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Race: Naerikk
Profession: Maneater
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 6:34 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Commensalism http://standingtrials.com/viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6535
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not really.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Persuasion: Calming someone
Negotiation: Not settling for low quality
Tactics: Taking advantage
Business Management: Sales through theatrics
Detection: Identifying a meal’s ingredients
Acting: Dramatism
Persuasion: Destroying fear and doubt through eloquence
Deception: Ironic lie

Loot: -3 silvers. Please don't make me update the CS q.q
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: I'd rather have it be negative, even if publically Paplo was a nice fellow. He was plotting to eat her! That has to count.
Collaboration: Yes, with In'ira. I contacted her and she says she's gonna retire her, and that she wants no rewards. Even if the thread was never finished, it has a proper stopping point, and it's an enjoyable read.
Magic EXP: No.
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Kovic
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:05 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Warning: Do not ingest http://standingtrials.com/viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6345
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence, death, cannibalism, gore. Fucking dope, if you ask me.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Faking one’s death
Stealth: Tailing someone
Stealth: Blending with the environment
Stealth: Assessing risk of being discovered
Tactics: Hit and run
Running: Sprinting
Mortalborn Ability (Perfect Organism): Making bone daggers
Mortalborn Ability (Perfect Organism): Ingesting Kovic causes mutations
Tactics: Improvisation
Psychology: Routine-driven individuals
Unarmed combat: Throat Strike

Dunno if I understand the review system. If these knowledges are too many, just remove from the bottom. kpeaceoutbye

Loot: A follower.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Negative. Just read the thread.
Collaboration: Yes, with Gar'rek. Easily one of my favorite threads with Kovic. This thread opens a new path for Kovic, and I'm hella excited to get it graded. Gar'rek was an amazing partner. Sadly, he's retiring this PC, and requests no rewards. The possibility was discussed of him being NPCed as a follower of Mammon/Paplo/Kovic, but nah.
Magic EXP: NOOOOOOPe.

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Kovic
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 11:10 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Pedestrians on the Storm http://standingtrials.com/viewtopic.php?f=88&t=3124
City/Area: Ironridge, Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Violence, yes.
Requested Rewards:

Kovic


Just my points, and negative fame if you can spare it.

Dionysia

Skill Knowledge:
Navigation: Knowing The Road Routes of the Area
Politics: Educate Yourself On Allies Before Meetings
Animal Training: Calming A Great Ironridge Tiger
Animal Training: Sometimes Trained Animals Won't Always Listen
Interrogation: Using A Giant Beast To Get Information
Investigation: Don't Trust A Stranger In The Woods
Unarmed Combat: Remain At The Ready Around Strangers
Intimidation: Threaten Captives With Death By Tiger

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Ne'haer: Road Routes Within The Surrounding Areas



Loot: I think none.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: I bet it's positive for Dionysia, but you'll have to be the judge of that.
Collaboration: Yes. With Dionysia.
Magic EXP: No
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Nightshade Eld
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Profession: The Best Hero
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Thu Feb 15, 2018 2:36 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Wing Beats
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: I got bored during a couple of my classes today and I'm still trying to get back into the swing of being active, so I did this. No particular warnings since nothing bad happens. Feed back is much appreciated.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Meditation: Useful for wing control
Meditation: Practicing individual muscle movements
Meditation: Controlled breathing
Strength: Weight lifting
Strength: Bearing the weight of Wings of Valence armor
Strength: Practicing till you’re in pain

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Charlie Warrick
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Thu Feb 15, 2018 3:14 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Baby It's Cold Outside
City/Area: Venora
Notes/Warnings: It's cute. Cute flirty cute.
Requested Rewards:

Charlie
Discipline: Attempting to do the proper thing even when you don't want to
Etiquette: Waiting for others to leave before personal conversations
Leadership: Making someone tell you how they feel about you
Politics: Using correct titles even with your lover
Politics: How to address the staff

Oliver Venora: The Consummate Politician
Oliver Venora: You are proud of him
Oliver Venora: Writes poetry for you
Oliver Venora: You are enough for him

Oliver
Discipline: Retaining one’s composure in front of a nude lover
Etiquette: Giving credit where it is due
Etiquette: Following through on one’s obligations
Etiquette: Waiting until others are gone to be mushy
Politics: Relaxing the part of Lord out of public purview
Politics: Successfully executing a charity event
Rhetoric: Reciting poetry
Seduction: Using poetic words to seduce someone

Charlie Warrick: Wants to be enough for you
Charlie Warrick: Cares about you
Charlie Warrick: Looks good nude
Charlie Warrick: Spent the night with you

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Kayleigh
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Joined: Tue Dec 06, 2016 8:28 am
Race: Human
Profession: Singer, Wanderer
Renown: +49
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Thu Feb 15, 2018 6:01 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Let's Start A Riot
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Never really lifted off unfortunately.
Requested Rewards:
  • Song: Song of the Exile
  • Instrument (Harp): Composition of Melodies
  • Instrument (Harp): Inspiration Found From Environment
  • Singing: Singing Loudly With Clarity
  • Singing: Clear Vocals Carry Far
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nurp
Fame: Street performance
Collaboration: Was meant to be, but no
Magic EXP: No
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Profession: Trouble
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Thu Feb 15, 2018 6:17 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: With Fist and Thunder
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: "Ancient history" for those who get the reference. ;)
Requested Rewards:
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  • Personal: Facing Uncertain Death
Skill
  • Leadership: Shepherding Others to Safety
  • Weapon (Broadsword): The Weight of a Broadsword
  • Weapon (Broadsword): Basic Strikes
  • Weapon (Broadsword): Angled Strikes
  • Weapon (Broadsword): Better Suited For One Hand
  • Weapon (Broadsword): Footwork is Important
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nurp
Fame: Idk
Collaboration: Past Event
Magic EXP: No
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OOC Note: As of Ashan 717 Patrick has been cursed with Sesser, therefore once a season he's at risk of turning into a Sessfiend. Should the occassion actually come to occur, PC's are warned to consider the extreme risk of injury and even their life; before proceeding to participate in the event. Looking forward to the potential plots and threads to come!
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Neronin
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Profession: Museum Curator
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Thu Feb 15, 2018 2:14 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Taxing Journey
City/Area: Outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence in combat, reanimation
Requested Rewards:

Ryder
Knowledge:
Longsword: Hitting from behind
Longsword: Overhead slash
Longsword: Use a speed advantage
Longsword: Combat in snow
Longsword: Fighting with blurred vision
Endurance: Pushing through immense injury
Leadership: Giving clear orders
Leadership: Taking care of your own

Loot: Various weapons, most for Al’Angyryl but a good quality dagger for Ryder, 100GN cut of the loot taken from tax collector.
Injuries/Overstepping: Mauled hand
Fame: -3 Banditry, -2 Murder
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Neronin
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Skystepping over a battle
Rupturing: Skystepping to avoid the blade
Rupturing: Bringing forces into battle
Rupturing: Using Blink to command a battlefield
Rupturing: Using portals to avoid flanking maneuvers
Intimidation: Using undead friends to scare people
Appraisal: Noting another’s leadership skills
Appraisal: Assessing a subordinate’s quality
Loot: 100GN cut of the tax collector’s gold.
Injuries/Overstepping: Mild overstepping
Fame: -2 magic use, -2 murder
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, Rupturing
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