The Review
Rakvald
Overview
What a journey for Rakvald! He's had highs and lows - and boy oh boy have there been some adventures. I love the incredibly down-to-earth attitude he has and the way you write him is just ace. It's been so much fun writing with you - and I hope to do so again.
Points
XP: 20 (not for magic)
Renown: 30
Renown: 30
Loot
You gave "The Door" one day of your life. This will be a plot which is either approved, or run, by me! Therefore if you have a plot you'd really like to run - give me a yell and we'll work it out.
Sacrifice 1: Rakvald loses the ability to talk in a normal voice. You may still whisper or shout, but anything in between is, simply, impossible to you.
Sacrifice 2: Rakvald's sacrifice is an enormous one and it has been noticed. When he wakes, he has indeed lost his Immortality, but he has the ability "Genetic Memory (Moderate)", except it allows him to go back through his Lotharro incarnations.
Sacrifice 1: Rakvald loses the ability to talk in a normal voice. You may still whisper or shout, but anything in between is, simply, impossible to you.
Sacrifice 2: Rakvald's sacrifice is an enormous one and it has been noticed. When he wakes, he has indeed lost his Immortality, but he has the ability "Genetic Memory (Moderate)", except it allows him to go back through his Lotharro incarnations.
Knowledge
None.
Patrick
Overview
Such an interesting PC - I do love where you've taken Pat. He's had such a journey and I'm really interested to see where he ends up now. I'll be watching!
Points
XP: 20 (Not for Magic.)
Renown: 30
Renown: 30
Loot
You gave "The Door" two days of your life. These can be consecutive or separate and will be plot(s) which are either approved, or run, by me! Therefore if you have a plot you'd really like to run - give me a yell and we'll work it out.
Sacrifice 1: Vri's blessing has been removed from you.
Sacrifice 2: Patrick's second sacrifice sends out ripples among the Immortals who watched. Qylios is pleased at him for the depth of sacrifice he was willing to make and so, she steps in. By night, or whenever it is dark, Patrick indeed has lost the goodness in his soul. During daylight, though, he has not and has the chance to put right anything he might have done. Qylios is watching how he will rise to this challenge.
Knowledge
None
Toraj
Overview
What I love about Toraj is that, in every thread I've written with you, he's surprised me. Yet, every time, what he's done has made perfect sense for who he is. He's such a well-played and thoughtfully constructed character. It's great fun writing with him.
Points
XP: 20 (not for magic)
Renown: 30
Renown: 30
Loot
You gave "The Door" three days of your life. These can be consecutive or separate and will be plot(s) which are either approved, or run, by me! Therefore if you have a plot you'd really like to run - give me a yell and we'll work it out.
Sacrifice 1: You lose, permanently, all of the memories which you are still unaware of and have no means of getting them back. However, you develop the "Eidetic" ability from Vri's blessing. This only works from the moment Toraj wakes up - from that point on, he will never forget anything again.
Sacrifice 2: This sacrifice resonates and Qylios' heart is filled with pride for her son. The sacrifice is made and it takes, but when Toraj awakens, there is a candle there. When lit, it allows him to remember who he is. But only when lit. You may light it for one hour every three days - when not lit, you can remember how it felt - but it's like you know in theory, not in practice.
Spirit the Hare is now a permanent companion - and has a permanent telepathic bond with Toraj.
Sacrifice 1: You lose, permanently, all of the memories which you are still unaware of and have no means of getting them back. However, you develop the "Eidetic" ability from Vri's blessing. This only works from the moment Toraj wakes up - from that point on, he will never forget anything again.
Sacrifice 2: This sacrifice resonates and Qylios' heart is filled with pride for her son. The sacrifice is made and it takes, but when Toraj awakens, there is a candle there. When lit, it allows him to remember who he is. But only when lit. You may light it for one hour every three days - when not lit, you can remember how it felt - but it's like you know in theory, not in practice.
Spirit the Hare is now a permanent companion - and has a permanent telepathic bond with Toraj.
Knowledge
None
Praetorum
Overview
I've been so pleased to get to know Prae over the course of these threads. He's an interesting pc who really has layers of complexity. I love the way you write him and have really enjoyed writing with you.
Points
XP: 15 (not for magic)
Renown: 20
Renown: 20
Loot
You gave "The Door" one day of your life. This will be a plot which is either approved, or run, by me! Therefore if you have a plot you'd really like to run - give me a yell and we'll work it out.
Sacrifice 1: You lose the memories / knowledge as described. However, when you return home the book containing all of it is there. It isn't the same as actually remembering, but you have the knowledge back.
Sacrifice 2: Not made.
Sacrifice 1: You lose the memories / knowledge as described. However, when you return home the book containing all of it is there. It isn't the same as actually remembering, but you have the knowledge back.
Sacrifice 2: Not made.
Knowledge
None