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Name: Eddrick
Knowledge:
Interrogation: Invite Belligerency to Justify Harsh Accusation
Interrogation: Let the Subject Contradict Himself
Interrogation: Playing Both "Good Cop" and "Bad Cop"
Leadership: Do Not Prolong an Execution
Leadership: Let Those Who Want to Go, Leave Amiably
Persuasion: An Honest Revelation of Future Plans
Persuasion: Let Those Who Support You Be Heard
Story Telling: The Fortress Battle and The Council of Raskalarn
Weapon: Ball and Chain: Both Longer and Shorter Reach Than a Longsword
Unarmed Combat Brawling: Use a Stabbed Item to Get Leverage on the Blade
Non-Skill Knowledge:
Adrienna: Prefers Bandit Life
Coren: Deceased
Coren: Trusted Lieutenant Turned Traitor
Loot: N/A
Injuries: A few inconsequential scrapes. The cut along Eddrick's back will be annoying but heal after 20 trials.
Expenses: N/A
Renown: 5
Magic XP: N/A
Points: 15
Name: Adrienna
Knowledge:
Deception: Lies told as truths
Disguise: Cuts to fake a fight
Leadership: Execute traitors to maintain power
Leadership: Words stir up crowds
Psychology: Bear no emotional attachments
Psychology: Concessions shows weakness
Psychology: Stubbornness kills
Psychology: Terrible anger management
Tactics: Attack from behind to gain advantage
Tactics: Moment of surprise
Non-Skill Knowledge:
Coren: Dead
Coren: Traitor
Eddrick: Remains Rhakrii leader
Eddrick: Serves an immortal
General: Loyalty can be broken
Rhakriis: Bandits turning goodie two shoes
Rhakriis: Once a good home, now a memory
Rhakriis: To be absolved of their crimes
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Expenses: N/A
Renown: 5
Magic XP: N/A
Points: 15
Knowledge:
Interrogation: Invite Belligerency to Justify Harsh Accusation
Interrogation: Let the Subject Contradict Himself
Interrogation: Playing Both "Good Cop" and "Bad Cop"
Leadership: Do Not Prolong an Execution
Leadership: Let Those Who Want to Go, Leave Amiably
Persuasion: An Honest Revelation of Future Plans
Persuasion: Let Those Who Support You Be Heard
Story Telling: The Fortress Battle and The Council of Raskalarn
Weapon: Ball and Chain: Both Longer and Shorter Reach Than a Longsword
Unarmed Combat Brawling: Use a Stabbed Item to Get Leverage on the Blade
Non-Skill Knowledge:
Adrienna: Prefers Bandit Life
Coren: Deceased
Coren: Trusted Lieutenant Turned Traitor
Loot: N/A
Injuries: A few inconsequential scrapes. The cut along Eddrick's back will be annoying but heal after 20 trials.
Expenses: N/A
Renown: 5
Magic XP: N/A
Points: 15
Name: Adrienna
Knowledge:
Deception: Lies told as truths
Disguise: Cuts to fake a fight
Leadership: Execute traitors to maintain power
Leadership: Words stir up crowds
Psychology: Bear no emotional attachments
Psychology: Concessions shows weakness
Psychology: Stubbornness kills
Psychology: Terrible anger management
Tactics: Attack from behind to gain advantage
Tactics: Moment of surprise
Non-Skill Knowledge:
Coren: Dead
Coren: Traitor
Eddrick: Remains Rhakrii leader
Eddrick: Serves an immortal
General: Loyalty can be broken
Rhakriis: Bandits turning goodie two shoes
Rhakriis: Once a good home, now a memory
Rhakriis: To be absolved of their crimes
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Expenses: N/A
Renown: 5
Magic XP: N/A
Points: 15
Comments: Excellent power struggle thread. It was really fun to read how Eddrick slowly exposed the traitor's plot. Adrienna is also written really well as a fierce fighter with a temper, however, be careful because you sometimes slip into different tenses while writing. Other than that, very enjoyable. Well done!
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