Tristan
Experience: 15 no magic xp
Knowledge:
Endurance x2
Strength x2
Running x1
Detection x2
Persuasion x3
Renown: none
Skill Usage: Appropriate to level.
Loot/Losses: none
Injuries/Conditions: none
Consequences: none
Ivy
Experience: 15 no magic xp
Knowledge: Let me know if you return, Ivy, and I'll give you knowledges.
Renown: none
Skill Usage: Appropriate to level.
Loot/Losses: none
Injuries/Conditions: none
Consequences: none
Comments: A fun little meeting in the middle of the street... actually, not so fun, very much a tear-soaked and miserable meeting! But well written.
Ivy's upset is well portrayed here, and I find myself wondering about the circumstances of her hurry through the streets. I wonder if she was a noble at this point though? It seems to reference his nobility while ignoring her own connection to the Gawayne's? Anyway, she is a fun character, and I hope to see more of her in the future sometime, should you return.
Tristan was quirky and fun as always. I thought the idea of Faith carrying his stuff for the lord would have been pretty funny, given how small she is. The banter between Ivy and Tristan was fun to read. Tristan's insistence that Ivy stop apologizing was a nice touch that reflected his good-nature (she really did go overboard, but I suppose that happens when you potentially offend a noble!).
I would have liked to read more about their interactions with each other, as hinted toward the end, as they seemed to get along well with each other. Anyway, enjoy the points and rewards.
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