Thinking Outside the Bottle

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A section for players to give reviews and feedback on other users' and their writing style. This can be in the form of praise or constructive criticism.
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Patrick
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Thinking Outside the Bottle

Thu Nov 10, 2016 12:30 pm

So. Branching out to the other parts of the forum after curiosity, I discover somebody *cough Freya cough* wrote her perspective on Patrick as a character. Needless to say I was baffled and enlightened to see such a wonderful outlook, and humbled by the mere fact somebody went to such extent! So with my natural curiosity sated and my awareness that this section of the forum exists, I've proudly allowed myself to post a thread for others to provide their own feedback and insights.
(More like agonizingly criticize my terrible faults!)


Anyways feel free to post any sort of commentary and the like here, I'd love to learn where my strong suits and weak suits are in terms of writing. I'm sure there are many, many things anybody can point out that I've either done terribly or miserably elaborated on! (I'm a fan of constructive criticism)
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Patrick
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Posts: 1187
Joined: Mon Apr 25, 2016 10:39 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Trouble
Renown: +300
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Medal count: 22

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Thinking Outside the Bottle

Thu May 31, 2018 9:37 am

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Are these still a thing? Figured I'd give this a bump since I've had plenty of time to make mistakes and stuff. So anybody who feels inclined to, can remark on any of my PC's here! They are as followed:
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