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Ivanthe
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1st of Ashan, 718
The guilty were so gloriously nervous when they were confronted with their wrongdoings. Even when nothing was said out loud.

It was moot that one hunter or another had betrayed Ivanthe to his prospective kidnappers; they were the only people in Etzos he spoke more than two words to, and his lack of family or concerned party that might bat an eye at his disappearance was not something that anyone else in the city might care about or notice.

Finding out who it was, though, was a matter of luck and suspicion. There was a thin, raggedy hunter named Stannen who was usually found in the corners of the Chopping Block; Ivanthe had heard Old Man Farlin berating the man more than once for late kills and poor numbers. He seemed to stick around because Farlin simply wanted every pound of meat he could get and because he had nowhere else to go.

But for the past two days, Stannen had been conspicuously absent. And when he’d reappeared on the morning of the 29th, the annoyed dismay with which he’d looked at Ivanthe was enough to make alarms go off.

Slowly stirring up his empathy, Ivanthe had smiled and remarked calmly that he hadn’t seen the older hunter for awhile, but Stannen hadn’t missed much––the past few days had been decidedly boring and uneventful.

Rage, disgust, and terror were proof enough that Stannen hadn’t wanted to see him there.

When Ivanthe asked Farlin for the night off, the old man had nodded and waved his hand. “Yeah, that weather you took last night earns you a break. Look after yourself.” And that was that.

Stannen wasn’t an especially smart man, but Ivanthe hadn’t survived ten years by taking risks; when the other hunter finally emerged from the Chopping Block with an annoyed scowl on his face, Ivanthe was tucked between two stalls and half-hidden between a pair of bickering fishwives.

Stannen didn’t even glance his way before heading down the street.

Ivanthe hesitated at first. With the sun back in the sky, the open places on the street would surely give him away. Perhaps if he stayed on the opposite side, keeping pace but not getting close…

He might have stayed there too long and lost his prey entirely, were it not for something remarkable: right near the Chopping Block, not twenty yards from the door, a scruffy young man slipped away from the wall he had been leaning against. He shifted idly for a moment, eyes trained on Stannen, then turned and began to follow the him down the street.

Ivanthe watched in amazement for just one moment, because he wasn’t going to allow fear to delay him a second time.

Opposite both men, Ivanthe began to follow.
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The young man on Stannen’s tail was not new to the task, but neither was he an expert. Ivanthe watched him, and Ivanthe learned.

Every movement the man made, the boy mirrored on the opposite side of the street. His new prey weaved through the crowd, pausing, drifting back a few feet, zig-zagging from one knot of people to another and never venturing into the openness of the middle thoroughfare.

Ivanthe moved in constant terror that the man would turn and notice being followed, but it was also exhilarating––and it was a step up from the uncultured guessing he’d been just about to do.

Stannen was so far ahead he was almost out of sight, but the boy didn’t mind; his new friend was keeping a confident pace, and it hadn’t seemed to occur to the man that he himself was the one being followed.

The Chopping Block wasn’t far from the city gates, and the city gates was where their little train went.
Ivanthe’s new friend hung back for just a few moments as Stannen made his way past scowling guards, slouching against a wall and eyeing his nails nonchalantly. Ivanthe pinned himself behind an old woman haggling for a chicken. Neither the woman nor the chicken owner noticed.

The second time Ivanthe glanced back, his new friend had left the wall and was also walking toward the gates. Ivanthe skirted closer, but not too close––because the moment his friend reached the gate, he turned around to scan the crowd.

Breath freezing in his lungs, Ivanthe dropped to one knee to tie one shoe, and he immediately regretted it; had he been looking, one boy suddenly dropping down would have been a dead giveaway of being followed. The whole world sharpened around him, sound became clearer and time slowed to a crawl as he anticipated the shout of discovery, a growl of rage, perhaps an attack.

Nothing came. Ivanthe kept pretending to tie his shoe and swallowed a lump in his throat. Then, after too many painful seconds, he turned his head just so and glanced at the gates.

His friend was already halfway through them.

Relief crashed over him like a wave, and he made a mental note to never be so foolish again. Ivanthe waited until the young man was out of sight, then made his way over to the gates in turn. The only guard who paid him a second glance was Kendi, a regular on the rotation who always looked at Ivanthe with concerned disapproval. Ivanthe cracked a ghostly smile in Kendi’s direction, then slipped out of the city.
Ivanthe quickly became aware of a new problem: the foot traffic right outside the gates almost immediately thinned out as he moved further away. He couldn’t rely on other people for cover any longer.

Up ahead, his new friend didn’t seem concerned about it. He walked down the road casually, hands stuffed in his pockets and head held high as he nearly strutted after Stannen––no more thought given to subtlety.

When Stannen turned around, it felt inevitable. The world stopped for a moment as the two men locked eyes; Ivanthe’s new friend smiled at this enemy, teeth bared and a wicked gleam in his eye.

Stannen spun on his heel and ran away.
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Ivanthe had managed to lean against the skeleton of a broken wagon by the time Stannen took off, and tensed up in anticipation of a chase.

But his new friend did nothing. Hr simply cracked his knuckles, examined his fingernails for a moment and then spun around to walk right back into the city. He didn’t even glance Ivanthe’s way.

The boy was then left with a sudden choice: follow Stannen or follow his new friend. Both of them felt almost magnetic.

He chose to follow Stannen.

He did had a bit of an advantage, in that Stannen had run straight into grass and foliage––where Ivanthe could track him. At first the trail was sharp and brazen, beaten right through the grass and shrubs without a hint of care. Some yards out, however, the prints became cautious, suddenly looping and backpedaling as Stannen presumably tried to throw off any pursuers. He seemed to assume that none of them were agents of wilderness themselves.

As the trail grew longer, it also grew calmer. Stannen seemed to have realized at some point that whoever Ivanthe’s new friend was, that person had not followed into the brush. The steps became closer together, indicating a slower pace, and Ivanthe slowed down to match them. He didn’t want to actually run into Stannen, after all.

Tracking a man was not all that different from tracking an animal, especially since Stannen was not particularly good at hunting or being hunted. His path, which had begun by aiming north, began carving steadily eastward and then very gently rounding back toward the city.

Or at least, back toward somewhere near the city.

Ivanthe was not particularly surprised when it took him to the base of the plateau, where the ground was sharp and sheer where it rose out of the ground. There was a thin stream running along the bank, and plants crowded hungrily at its banks to provide pleasant cover for all sorts of animals and also for little boys doing their best to stay unnoticed.

Behind that strip of life, however, where the ground became mountainside, the rocks jutted into the air and created overhangs that any huntsman huntsman would be glad to pitch his tent under. Ivanthe grew even more cautious as the trail grew warmer, until finally he saw a thin line of smoke trickling out from the side of the mountain.

Stannen’s camp was just as messy and unorganized as the man himself––the sort of camp that would have earned Ivanthe a beating two cycles ago. From his cover behind a collection of boulders, the boy could only just make out the dark shape of a stained and ragged tent, several sacks strewn over the ground, an almost-dead firepit, and a cursing Stannen kicking a rock.

Ivanthe regarded the man with a tilted head, knowing better than to step any more into the light but still wondering what exactly Stannen was trying to do––both his immediate action of kicking a rock, and also the general question of why he had attempted to set slavers on Ivanthe’s tail in the first place and why Ivanthe’s new friend had an interest in him. That Stannen was manipulative was not a question, even if he wasn’t very good at it; what exactly he was trying to manipulate was something else entirely.

Ivanthe waited until Stannen stormed into his tent, then took his time stepping away from his hiding place and slinking back toward the city gates. His curiosity had been piqued, as had his irritation, but now was not the time for any more spying.

He had the sneaking suspicion that if he wanted to learn more, he had to wait.
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I thought this was a nice thread. It flowed smoothly and held my interest, but it was simple and no overly complex. I like when simplicity and magic go hand-in-hand. Ivanthe seems like a very formidable kid.

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Renown: None, you sneaky little sneaker.

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Empathy: using surprise to your advantage
Empathy: the truth is in the feeling
Empathy: the color of horror
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Stealth: learning by watching
Stealth: being small helps

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