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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Mute » Sun Jul 08, 2018 5:07 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Debts Repaid
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Allusions to rape and murder
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Empathy: Emotions as Colors
Intelligence: Attentive Listening to gather Information
(I'm open to any others you might glean from this)

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Gwen: My Empath Mentor
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: I don't think so. Only the initiation was touched upon in the thread
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Mute
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Posts: 20
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Renown: 0
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Victor Amielle » Sun Jul 08, 2018 11:45 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Lysoria] A Walk Around Town
City/Area: Lysoria
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:

Jonathan Burr

Knowledge:
Stealth: Sneaking up on someone
Etiquette: It's not polite to wake someone up with a monster.
Etiquette: Try not sneaking into people's bedrooms.
Etiquette: Behaving around nobles.
Etiquette: Revealing mutations in the right company.
Etiquette: Don't run!
Seduction: Bravely running away.
Seduction: Complimenting appearances.
Seduction: Arm around the shoulder move.
Seduction: Learning to wait.
Seduction: Admitting attraction.
Seduction: Physical contact.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A



Victor

Discipline: Keeping your cool in an unexpected situation
Discipline: Trying not to show any sign of weakness
Endurance: Running after somebody
Etiquette: How to eat a roll correctly
Etiquette: Don't do the servants' work for them!
Etiquette: Don't have a discussion in front of somebody's bedroom
Interrogation: Sometimes you need to be direct
Intimidation: I have other toys!
Leadership: Telling servants what to do
Persuasion: Asking someone to give you time to sort out your feelings
Seduction: Physical contact
Stealth: Walking on your tiptoes

Jonathan Burr: Is attracted to me
Mutation: The Taste of a Harvester

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes. They were seen. There'll probably be rumours.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Victor Amielle
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Posts: 222
Joined: Wed Jul 26, 2017 11:29 am
Location: Scalvoris
Race: Human
Profession: Researcher
Renown: +125
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Medals: 3
Hoarder (1) Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Jonathan Burr » Mon Jul 09, 2018 10:28 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Deoch Daire
City/Area:Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: using a pit under a fire to help it gain oxygen.
Fieldcraft: lining a fire pit with stones.
Fieldcraft: A lean-to as a shelter.
Fieldcraft: Construction of a lean-to
Fieldcraft: A fire is necessary to keep warm.
Fieldcraft: making your camp.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No.
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Jonathan Burr
The Wild Child
 
Posts: 322
Joined: Sun Mar 11, 2018 8:01 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Academic
Renown: +45
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Player Review
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Medals: 3
First Love (1) Right In The Feels (1) First Kiss (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Cervantez » Mon Jul 09, 2018 1:41 pm

nothing to see
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Posts: 2
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Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Kasoria » Tue Jul 10, 2018 9:10 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Risen
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not really... Mild Language?
Requested Rewards:

Three, maybe four parts to come. Enjoy the starter!

Knowledge:
Cooking: Crispy Bacon and Fried Eggs
Cooking: Saving Bacon Grease for Future Meals
Discipline: Not Going Back To Prison
Endurance: Completing a Grueling Exercise
Meditation: Your Mind in One Place, Your Body in Another
Strength: The "Toad-Bird" Exercise


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: The Forgotten Cells, Hall of Rule and Reprimand

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Nyet
Collaboration: Nein
Magic EXP: Non
"This is the life we choose, the life we lead. And there is only one guarantee: none of us will see Heaven."
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Kasoria
The Raggedy Man
 
Posts: 268
Joined: Sat Apr 23, 2016 11:34 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
Renown: +195
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Medals: 3
Painting With Words (1) Murderer (1) History Repeated (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Devin » Wed Jul 11, 2018 3:02 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Big Trouble in Little Korlasir
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Devin is going shopping and getting on the poor NPC's nerves!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: The heat inside a forge
Strength: Lifting a polearm
Strength: Lifting a big hammer
Strength: The proper diet is important
Strength: If you want to grow stronger, you need to train regularly
Strength: Upending a treasure chest

Location: Scalvoris: Little Korlasir
NPC: Hurk: Owner of Little Korlasir
NPC: Hurk: Blacksmith

Loot: 20 crossbow bolts
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I'm not sure. Do I get Renown for being really annoying?
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Devin
Approved Character
 
Posts: 155
Joined: Tue Apr 03, 2018 12:25 am
Race: Human
Profession: Thief
Renown: +70
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Medals: 2
Living Legend (1) Lol Worthy (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Xander Andaris » Fri Jul 13, 2018 11:35 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Man Of Steel
City/Area: Yithiral, Ivorian
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Xander:
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Recruiting new eyes and ears
Intelligence: Only tell your sources what they need to know
Intelligence: Don't press potential sources too hard
Investigation: Asking straight questions gets straight answers
Investigation: Befriend those who could tell you something
Discipline: Not telling too much to a stranger
Discipline: Being comfortable around a giant being
Bladed combat (longsword): Certain swords are designed for certain styles
Bladed combat (longsword): Nothing will ever be as perfect for you as a custom made sword
Loot: -10GN for weapons sharpened
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Varlum:
Knowledge:
Smithing: Gentle strokes
Smithing: Repairs on a blade
Smithing: Specific angles to hammer
Smithing: Mixing powerful and gentle hits
Strength: Hammering metal
Strength: Conserving muscle power
Strength: Hard hits when forging
Strength: Using multiple muscles
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Don't think so
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Xander Andaris
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Posts: 575
Joined: Mon Feb 06, 2017 4:16 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Baron and Marshal of Astedia
Renown: +142
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Plot Notes
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Letters
Medals: 6
One Arc Later... (1) First Love (1) True Love (1) Married (1)
First Kiss (1) Starting A Family (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Rynata » Sat Jul 14, 2018 12:23 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: For Safety's Sake
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Devin
Knowledge:
Acting: Making your voice sound deeper
Acting: Playing a fortune teller
Acting: A fake sigh
Deception: Lying about your name
Deception: Telling people what they want to hear
Deception: Lying about the future will bring
Deception: Sometimes you need to think on your feet
Discipline: Trying not to freak out
Disguise: Using a potion to change your voice helps
Endurance: Carrying a lot of stuff for an extended amount of time
Persuasion: I have to eat, I need the money!

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Rynata: Wanted me to tell her her fortune
Rynata: I told her that the love of her life is blonde and has blue eyes
Rynata: I told her that it will rain blood in Vhalar

Loot: 1gn
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Yes please
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Rynata
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing a new addition to a place
Etiquette: A polite farewell
Intelligence: Spotting vague information
Intelligence: Accepting information with a grain of salt
Negotiation: Getting the other to name a price
Negotiation: Caution when dealing with mysterious strangers
Negotiation: The future in exchange for coin
Negotiation: Being generous to ensure good will
Persuasion: Presenting a plan with an attractive outcome
Persuasion: Appealing to someone's conscience
Persuasion: Knowing when to back off

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Theophilus of Viden: A cryptic fortune teller
Scalvoris: Impending cataclysm in Vhalar?!
Rowan: Foretold love interest?!

Loot: -1gn
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: probably not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rynata
Reverse Pirate
 
Posts: 229
Joined: Thu Feb 22, 2018 2:28 pm
Location: Scalvoris
Race: Biqaj
Profession: Ferryman
Renown: +130
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Medals: 3
Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Review Master (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Padraig » Sat Jul 14, 2018 10:48 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Horribly Unprepared
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Untangling yourself from a net
Acrobatics: Jumping down from a trap
Fieldcraft: Good footwear is a real bonus.
Fieldcraft: Never underestimate the value of equipment
Fieldcraft: Jungles have bugs. Lots of bugs

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: yes
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A



Padraig

Acrobatics: Untangling yourself from a net
Acrobatics: Jumping down from a trap
Detection: Spotting residue
Fieldcraft: Good footwear is a real bonus.
Fieldcraft: Never underestimate the value of equipment
Fieldcraft: Jungles have bugs. Lots of bugs
Strength: Catching a falling person

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: NA
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Padraig
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Posts: 916
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 11:22 am
Race: Human
Renown: +544
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Templates
Medals: 23
Character of the Month (1) Story of the Month (2) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) True Love (1)
Married (1) Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)
Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

Review Requests 2.1.5

Postby Padraig » Sat Jul 14, 2018 11:38 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: An Uneventful Shopping Trip
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Design: Planning functional and beautiful spaces
Design: Curtains for a dressing room.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A



Padraig

Investigation: Following a thief
Investigation: Techniques for apprehending
Celarion: Light shield is a very useful technique in conjunction with another

Loot: 150gn ( bounty in Rharne: here) + 1 bag of marbles.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Padraig
Approved Character
 
Posts: 916
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 11:22 am
Race: Human
Renown: +544
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Templates
Medals: 23
Character of the Month (1) Story of the Month (2) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) True Love (1)
Married (1) Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)
Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

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