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Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Eddrick Brodon » Sat Dec 09, 2017 9:57 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Trials of Bandit Hunting
City/Area: The Hotlands
Notes/Warnings: Killing Zombies
Requested Rewards: 13 skills each, based on collaborative thread w/8 posts each.

Eddrick Brodon
Skill-based Knowledge:
  • Hunting: Tracks in Sand Often Show Signs of Armor
  • Intelligence: A Loud-mouthed Prospect is an Unlikely Plant
  • Intelligence: Maintaining a Network of Carrier-Pigeon Locales
  • Intelligence: "Violator's Blood" Will Draw Risen Dead's Attention
  • Leadership: Being the Bait in Your Own Trap
  • Leadership: Keep Visibility and Contact With Your Men
  • Leadership: Not All Leadership Work is Glorious
  • Logistics: Timing Different Mount Speeds for Coordinated Arrival
  • Sociology: Too Much Confidence Can Mean Too Big a Mouth
  • Tactics: Close Terrain Features Can Prevent Enemy Flanking
  • Tactics: Let The Prospect Wait, to Gauge His Discipline
  • Tactics: Maintain a Misinformation Schedule in Case of Intruders
  • Trap Making: Clifftop Lemming Drop Lure Trap

Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • NPC: Perig'ah: Rhakrii Raiders' Messenger Bird Handler
  • NPC: Ravenna: Major Player in the Tower of Flesh
  • PC: Zelferan: Lothar Bandit Prospect
  • Rits: Short for "Raskits"; short for Raskithecal
Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: Cut on the Forehead
Fame: Nah...too far out in the desert
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope

Zelferan
Skill-based Knowledge:
  • Bludgeon: Mace: Getting the Feel of Weapon's Balance
  • Bludgeon: Mace: More Reach and Impact Than a Fist
  • Bludgeon: Mace: Not For Thrusting
  • Discipline: Keep Your Mind Occupied
  • Discipline: Patience in Negotiation
  • Field Craft: The Harsh Nature of the Desert
  • Intelligence: Successful Bandits Don't Establish Patterns
  • Intelligence: There are Walking Corpses in The Hotlands
  • Negotiation: Be Prepared to Wait
  • Negotiation: Posturing With Offers of Vague Rewards
  • Psychology: Humorous Banter in Life-or-Death Situations
  • Story Telling: The Story of a Brother's Betrayal
  • Trap Making: Clifftop Lemming Drop Lure Trap

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Knowledge:
  • NPC: Ravenna: Major Player in the Tower of Flesh
  • PC: Eddrick Brodon: Warchief of the Rhakrii Raiders
  • Ravenna: A Means to an End
  • Risen Dead: Hotlands Hazard to be Burned, Beheaded or Both
Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: Just some bumps and bruises
Fame: Nah...too far out in the desert
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope

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Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Max » Sat Dec 09, 2017 10:17 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Violent Reunion
City/Area: Scalvoris (Almund and on the path between Almund and Havardr)
Notes/Warnings: Violence and Language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Max:
Discipline: Remaining Focused Despite the Presence of a Lover
Mount: Tapping a Horse's Side to Increase Speed
Mount: Steering with the Reigns
Deception: Appearing to Know What You're Doing
Deception: Feigning Interest in Conversation
Deception: Meddling with a Crime Scene
Deception: Concocting a Convincing Lie
Deception: Using Fire to Get Rid of Damning Evidence
Deception: Creating Wounds to Sell a Story
Endurance: Persisting Despite Head Injury
Intimidation: Coasting Off Powerful Allies to Appear Equally Fearsome
Running: Giving Chase

Turbulent Waters: Maximizing Effect of Ability by Using Environment
Merces: Murderer
Merces: A Fire-Wielding Mage
Edmond: Member of The Guild
The Merchant Guild: Mismanaged Trade Fleet

Merces:
Defiance: Fire Destroys and Creates
Defiance: Dancing Flame Into Coils
Defiance: Manifest, and Encourage.
Defiance: Encouraging elements to Leap
Defiance: With Concentration Comes Precision
Defiance: Effects of Minor Overstepping
Defiance: Is a Parasitic Magic
Intimidation: The Use Of Threats

Maxine: Murderer
Edmond: Member of “The Guild”
Edmond: First Man I Killed
The Merchant Guild: MIsmanaged the Trade Fleet

Loot: Split loot from stolen cargo (moderator decides amount), stolen journal for Merces, and stolen compass and vial for Max (again, moderator's choice to ensure fairness).
Injuries/Overstepping: Max received a head wound from a rock. Merces experienced a migraine from overstepping.
Fame: Oh, yeah. Lots of negative.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Merces.

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Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Max » Sat Dec 09, 2017 10:39 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Every Time, You Remind Me
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence, language, references to nudity.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Max:
Unarmed Combat: Perks of Attacking From Behind
Unarmed Combat: Feet Make Good Weapons Too
Unarmed Combat: Ambushing an Opponent From Above
Unarmed Combat: Slipping a Punch
Unarmed Combat: Crushing a Face With Your Knee
Unarmed Combat: Displacing a Mounted Enemy With Your Hips
Unarmed Combat: Kicking While They're Down
Detection: Using a Better Vantage Point to Locate a Mark
Endurance: Fighting Through Fatigue
Seduction: Taking a Familiar Man Home

Merces: Uses Magic in Fights
Illaren: Immortal of Intoxication

Merces:
Brawling: Kick Em While They're Down
Brawling: Stabbing An opponent with a bottle
Brawling: Knee Em' in the Privates
Brawling: Using a Chair as a weapon
Defiance: Coating the fist with wind
Defiance: Caress
Brawling: Bottles and Tankards are weapons too
Acrobatics: Duck and Tumble

Illaren: Immortal of Intoxication
Maxine: Quite the Brawler

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Various bruises
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Merces.

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Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Caius Gawyne » Sun Dec 10, 2017 9:20 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Who I Really Am
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope.

Requested Rewards:

Darcyanna Venora


Skill Knowledge: (8+2=10 possible)
Resistance: Combining all the drugs and surviving
Resistance: Making coherent talk under the influence
Medicine: Overdosing fairydust causes very realistic visual and audio hallucinations
Medicine: To much reevi can cause lethargy
Endurance: Walking distances under the influence
Endurance: Walking barefoot in Zi’da
Sociology: Opening up to a friend
Sociology: Letting someone in
Sociology: Little dogs are the best when it comes to comforting
Sociology: Listening to a friends heartache

Other Knowledge:
Caius: Is haunted by his sisters past
Caius: blames himself for his sisters kidnaping
Caius: Took care of you when you needed it most
Caius: Has a lot of paper and books
Caius: You slept in his bed, but have not slept with him
Smudge: Loves warm hugs
Smudge: Is a rolly poly bundle of loveliness
Pythera: Haunts your waking dreams
Pythera: Terrifies you

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruise to thigh (5 trials), bruise to shin (5 trials)
Fame: No.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


Caius Gawyne


Skill Knowledge: (8+2=10 possible)
Caregiving: Being the sober one
Caregiving: Working through irrational behavior
Detection: The scent of reevi
Detection: Signs of overdose
Research: Gathering multiple sources on the same subject
Research: Piecing together limited information
Sociology: Listening to someone's difficult past
Sociology: Letting someone in
Sociology: Offering the comfort of a furred friend
Sociology: Sharing secrets

Other Knowledge:
Darcyanna Venora: Definitely has a drug problem
Darcyanna Venora: Was abused by her younger sister
Darcyanna Venora: Is terrified of Pythera's return
Darcyanna Venora: Knows all of your history
NPC: Pythera: Darcy's younger sister
NPC: Pythera: Psychotic, apparently
NPC: Pythera: You're going to have to take care of that
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope

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Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Nymph » Sun Dec 10, 2017 1:49 pm

CLOSED
After 41 pages, we are going to convert to a new review thread and archive this one once all grades are completed by our awesome Reviewers. You may find the new Review Request thread here. This is to be locked after my post and archived once all reviews are made.
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