Review Request 2.1.1

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Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Nymph » Thu Aug 17, 2017 11:19 am

Peer Review Requests
PLEASE DON'T EDIT OR REMOVE REVIEW REQUESTS.

Standing Trials has entered a new way of reviewing threads. Examples of requested grades from the beta testing can be found here.

Review System Information Guide


Standing Trials TOU: You should, at minimum, be posting 250 words per post.

Threads: Each player must write at minimum 1500 per thread.

Solos: You may choose 6 Skill Knowledge from your thread. For every post made after the first page, you gain an additional skill knowledge for a maximum of 15 total skill knowledge. Auto 10 points upon completion no matter what.

Collaboration Threads: You may choose 8 Skill Knowledge from your thread after you've made a total of 3 posts. For every post made after that, you gain an additional skill knowledge. Auto 15 points upon completion no matter what.

Moderated Threads: Final rewards are up to the moderator's discretion.

Overall, moderators and peer reviewers have the right to deny or modify knowledge given if they feel you're attempting to abuse the system. If claiming maximum numbers of knowledge, players may not dump the entirety of their skill knowledge into one skill.

Any participant of a thread may submit for their own rewards. However, as long as you get permission from all participants within the thread, you may also request for your partner(s) rewards as well. Please indicate that you received approval from your partner to post their rewards for them in your request.


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[b]Notes/Warnings:[/b] (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
[b]Requested Rewards:[/b]
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
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Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Kali'rial » Thu Aug 17, 2017 5:46 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Everything Counts In Large Amounts
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: suggestive themes at End with ftb
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge: (5 out of 8 for 3 posts)
Detection: Hearing danger in your sleep
Discipline: Prepared to fight anytime
Short Bow: How to release without firing
Seduction: Use of suggestive tone
Seduction: Innuendo

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Pash: Blessed by Zanik
Pash: Clumsy when excited
Pash: Easily distracted by nudity
Pash: Shares special moments with you, even when it's late

Elithem Mark: Playing emotional songs makes others emotional
Elithem Mark: Just a little more irresistible

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: Yes, with Pash
Magic EXP: No


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Posts: 615
Joined: Fri May 19, 2017 5:49 pm
Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Hunter for Cally's (Expert)
Renown: +167
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Medals: 11
Story of the Month (1) Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Review Master (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) First Kiss (1)
Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Kali'rial » Fri Aug 18, 2017 6:36 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Freedom
City/Area: Surrounding Waters and Landmarks
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (8 out of 11 for collab with 6 posts)
Detection: Picking out figures from a distance
Detection: Recognising signs of a shipwreck
Persuasion: Showing you're not a threat
Socialisation: Using caution during new meetings
Caregiving: Offering water to Mero
Caregiving: Comforting Mero
Detection: Knowing when to get help
Running: How to lope

Non-Skill Knowledge
Mero: Shipwrecked stranger
Mero: Half boy, half bird
Mero: Can't (or won't) talk
Mero: Half Avriel
Mero: You feel protective for him
Baya: Has a mount now
Baya: Is tenacious
Baya: Can produce flowers to soothe the stomach
Pash: Appears when you need him
Pash: Is wonderful with scared children
Pash: Carried Mero
Faith: Calm under pressure
Faith: Has knowledge of Athart
Faith: Blessed by Moseke
Faith: Works at The Order of Adunih
NPC: Squid (Order of Adunih)

Location: House of The Order of Adunih
Location: Athart
Athart: Is a slave city

Race: Avriel

Blessing of Sevrath: Can be used to heal

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: +1 Kindness to Mero
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: Yes with Pash, Mero and Baya
Magic EXP: No


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Posts: 615
Joined: Fri May 19, 2017 5:49 pm
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Profession: Hunter for Cally's (Expert)
Renown: +167
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Medals: 11
Story of the Month (1) Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Review Master (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) First Kiss (1)
Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Aeodan » Fri Aug 18, 2017 9:50 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Field Research II
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (6 max)
Endurance: Continuous, strenuous exercise builds resistance
Endurance: Enduring extreme pain
Endurance: Moderate pain feels great compared to extreme pain
Research: Understanding reference material
Research: Finding written records

Non-Skill Knowledge
LYCHL, the Jourkadri with a sickness
LYCHL: Warrior and father
LYCHL: "Knife of Soul"
Jourkadri libraries housed trade records
Strange Illness: Source of Jourkadri suffering

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: Yvithia: Discovering a forgotten library
Vri: Seeing the dead?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Half a Soul
 
Posts: 255
Joined: Thu Mar 16, 2017 11:31 pm
Location: Ivorian Sea
Race: Human
Profession: Sojourner
Renown: +30
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
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Medals: 11
Story of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1)
Changed (1) Scandalous (1) Keep it in the Family (1)

Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Yanahalqah » Sat Aug 19, 2017 10:35 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Crystal Clear
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nudity, Sexual theme and suggestions, fade to black
Requested Rewards:

Yanahalqah
Knowledge:
  1. Seduction: Lustful Whisper
  2. Seduction: Suggestive Sauntering
  3. Rathaan: Yludih
  4. Rathaan: Human Form
  5. Rathaan: Wants to try a relationship with you
  6. Rathaan: Knows you are Yludih
  7. Rathaan: Knows your human form
  8. Rathaan: Doesn't deal with Yludih revelation as easily as you
  9. Ulehi: Best not to speak it in Idalos, lest someone overhear
  10. Yludih Melding: Fusion of bodies
  11. Yludih melding: Intense pleasure

Sintih
Skill:
Strength: If at first you don't succeed, continue to force your way out

Other:
Yludih Melding: Not like other sex
Yludih Melding: Difficult to get out
Yludih Melding: Sharing Asterism pulses
Yludih Melding: Intoxicating
Saeri: Yludih
Saeri: Never told you about her family
Saeri: Likes you, wants you
Saeri: Blessing from Aelig?
Saeri: Convinced you some more

Collaboration: Yes



REVIEWED
"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Yanahalqah
Three-in-one
 
Posts: 553
Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2016 1:21 pm
Location: Andaris
Race: Yludih
Profession: Steward of the Iron Hand
Renown: +93
Character Sheet
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Medals: 8
Painting With Words (1) Beta Bot (1) One Arc Later... (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Rorom » Sat Aug 19, 2017 11:05 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Medicine Woman
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: Pretty tame, Rorom gets a bit nauseous and about to throw up, but doesn't.
Requested Rewards: 15 points each since the thread was concluded successfully.
Knowledge:
Rorom:
1. Endurance: Maintaining consciousness with a head injury.
2. Endurance: Not throwing up while nauseous.
3. Endurance: Walking while concussed.
4. Animal Handling: Pet warfare
5. Animal Handling: Dogs are protective of humans.
6. Animal Handling: Avian/Canine relations
7. Location: Ne'Haer: Temple of U'frek and Chrien
8. Location: Ne'Haer: Lochgrass Gardens
9. Medicine: Patient must sit still while being attended to.
10. NPC: Sniffer: Sel'ma's canine companion.
11. PC: Sel'ma, a good healer.
12. PC: Sel'ma, owed a favor by Rorom.

Sel'ma:
1. Animal Handling: Pet warfare
2. Animal Handling: Even birds can grow attached to their human companions.
3. Animal Handling: Avian/Canine Relations
4. Location: Ne'Haer: Temple of U'frek and Chrien
5. Location: Ne'Haer: Lochgrass Gardens
6. Medicine: Patient must sit still while being attended to.
7. Medicine: It's not good to sleep on an untreated headwound.
8. Medicine: Treating a concussion.
9. Medicine: Proscribing directions to a patient.
10. PC: Rorom: An honest sailor.
11. PC: Rorom: Owes Sel'ma a favor.
12. NPC: Fortuna: Rorom's avian companion.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Rorom had a concussion, but this thread was sometime ago. Maybe a scar on his scalp.
Fame: Sel'ma for helping a Ne'Haer fisherman and bringing him to safety to the temple.
Devotion: Not sure about Sel'ma's devotion. Probably nothing for Rorom except promising to take her somewhere via his boat. So nothing for Rorom.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

EDITs: I edited the note about Sel'ma, as she got back to me and is fine with the knowledges as I wrote them.
Also numbered the knowledges for easy reading. I know I'm not supposed to edit but thought it would be easier for you all if I did those small edits.


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Renown: +20
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Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Padraig » Sat Aug 19, 2017 6:45 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Pragmatic Presents Prevail
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope



Faith


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Organising a surprise
Logistics: Changing a plan based on new information

Loot: I've deducted 810gn from my ledger.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, please
Devotion: Vri: Act of True Love (+3), Confess Your Love (+3)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


Padraig


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Persuasion: Explaining why you need nothing
Rhetoric: Explaining complex concepts
Seduction: The ancient and well-practiced art of sweeping the girl off her feet. Literally
Strength: Carrying a person, even a small one, requires muscles.
Teaching: Using fresh produce as visual aids

Loot: +1 telescope, box of lenses and journal
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Padraig
Approved Character
 
Posts: 916
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 11:22 am
Race: Human
Renown: +544
Character Sheet
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Templates
Medals: 23
Character of the Month (1) Story of the Month (2) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) True Love (1)
Married (1) Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)
Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Nir'wei » Sun Aug 20, 2017 1:35 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dolphin's Cry
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: Animal abuse.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Knowing where to apply force.
Strength: Proper positioning of your feet.
Strength: Distribute force evenly across the body.
Strength: Bracing with your shoulder.
Strength: Adding to existing momentum.
Strength: Working with objects larger and heavier than yourself.
Endurance: Keeping reserves of energy.
Endurance: Applying constant pressure over long periods.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Good deed?
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes, but the other person abandoned it.
Magic EXP: No


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Disney Princess-in-training
 
Posts: 392
Joined: Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:38 am
Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Animal Handler of The Menagerie
Renown: +136
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Plot Notes
Player Review
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Medals: 10
Story of the Month (1) Painting With Words (1) Mentor (1) Beta Bot (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Right In The Feels (2) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Nir'wei » Sun Aug 20, 2017 1:50 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Off The Beaten Path
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Bit of violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Shortbow: How to rapid-draw.
Shortbow: Aim for the head first.
Shortbow: Shooting at point-blank range.
Shortbow: Always have a second arrow ready.
Shortbow: When you can't use precision, use speed.
Stealth: Avoid cluttered environments.
Stealth: The best attacks are on unsuspecting prey.
Stealth: There's a time where it's necessary.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Good deed?
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Disney Princess-in-training
 
Posts: 392
Joined: Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:38 am
Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Animal Handler of The Menagerie
Renown: +136
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Plot Notes
Player Review
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Medals: 10
Story of the Month (1) Painting With Words (1) Mentor (1) Beta Bot (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Right In The Feels (2) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.1

Postby Nir'wei » Sun Aug 20, 2017 1:59 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Lending A Hand
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Training: Commanding movement using hand gestures.
Animal Training: Commanding movement through use of reins.
Animal Training: Handing control to others.
Animal Training: Teaching more refined commanding gestures.
Animal Training: Combat mount training.
Teaching: Giving basic instructions.
Teaching: Practical instruction.
Teaching: Sometimes, demonstrations are better.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Nir'wei
Disney Princess-in-training
 
Posts: 392
Joined: Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:38 am
Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Animal Handler of The Menagerie
Renown: +136
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Plot Notes
Player Review
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Medals: 10
Story of the Month (1) Painting With Words (1) Mentor (1) Beta Bot (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Right In The Feels (2) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

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