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Postby Nir'wei » Tue Aug 15, 2017 11:48 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: When One Door Closes
City/Area: Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
1. Fieldcraft: Making use of all available materials.
2. Carpentry: Joining two halves of wood together.
3. Carpentry: Angling nails to provide a better seal.
4. Carpentry: Fitting complimentary pieces.
5. Carpentry: How to restore a shattered door.
6. Strength: Lift with your knees.
7. Fieldcraft: Repair before you replace.
8. Fieldcraft: Scavenge ideal pieces first.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, Good Deed
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Postby Faith » Tue Aug 15, 2017 11:59 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: When One Door Closes
City/Area: Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards: Faith

Knowledge:
Carpentry: Making use of all available materials.
Carpentry: Joining two halves of wood together.
Carpentry: Angling nails to provide a better seal.
Carpentry: Fitting complimentary pieces.
Carpentry: How to restore a shattered door.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, Good Deed
Devotion: Famula: Service without recompense (+1), Maintain position as valuable servant / slave (+5), champion master's ideals (+3)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Partner
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Medals: 54
Character of the Month (1) Contributor of the Month (1) Story of the Month (1) World Developer (1)
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Shop Keeper (1) Mentor (1) Ambassador (1)
Supporter (1) Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Ascension (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (5)
Hoarder (1) ...ow. (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (2) True Love (1) Married (1) Changed (1)
Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Puppet Master (1) Pen Pal (1)

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Postby Faith » Tue Aug 15, 2017 12:29 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Freedom
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards: Faith
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Tone of voice with patients in shock
Caregiving: Giving as much information as one can
Caregiving: Remaining calm
Investigation: Asking questions to aid diagnosis
Investigation: Thorough examination leads to efficient diagnosis
Leadership: Preparing for a medical admission
Leadership: Telling people what you need, clearly
Leadership: Directing and requesting

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Positive, Good Deed (volunteering time, helping medically, offering a place to live)
Devotion: Famula: Service without recompense (+2) (volunteering, offering a place to live), give another mortal employment (+3)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Medals: 54
Character of the Month (1) Contributor of the Month (1) Story of the Month (1) World Developer (1)
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Shop Keeper (1) Mentor (1) Ambassador (1)
Supporter (1) Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Ascension (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (5)
Hoarder (1) ...ow. (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (2) True Love (1) Married (1) Changed (1)
Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Puppet Master (1) Pen Pal (1)

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Postby Neronin » Tue Aug 15, 2017 3:33 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Pestilential Waters
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Gross Blight undead violence. You have been warned.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Necromancy: Blight
Necromancy: Blight thrall can be dangerous when damaged
Necromancy: Blight takes trials to Create
Stealth: Rolling Footsteps to be Quieter
Intimidation: Leaving Al'Angyryl Mark to Scare People

Location: Underground Reservoir

NPC: Bervic the Cobbler

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer discretion
Devotion: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes: Necromancy


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Location: Etzos
Race: Human
Profession: Museum Curator
Renown: +175
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Medals: 7
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Guild Master (1)
Pioneer (1) Murderer (1) Survivor (1)

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Postby Silv » Tue Aug 15, 2017 11:02 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Ringing of Bells
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Just a combat training thread
Requested Rewards:
Acrobatics: How to duck a punch
Detection: Utilizing auditory cues to judge movement
Endurance: Getting up from hard landings
Unnarmed Combat: Kren Maii stance
Unnarmed Combat: Defend with forearm punches
Unnarmed Combat: Knee Strike

Location: Fist of Aedirn
Kren Maii: A Style of Efficency

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, perhaps mild headaches
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Postby Padraig » Wed Aug 16, 2017 10:50 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Future
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope


Padraig

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Planning surprises
Logistics: Planning ways around cultural norms
Logistics: To do lists to aid planning a pregnancy
Persuasion: Mutualism is a scientific thing, honest.
Persuasion: Putting forward emotions as scientific facts
Psychology: Allaying fears
Sociology: Maintaining secrets among immediate family only is culturally appropriate
Sociology: Cultural norms for behavior during pregnancy

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No


Faith

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Interrogation: Trying to find out what secret your significant other is keeping
Logistics: Planning together requires time and communication
Persuasion: Trying to wheedle information out of someone
Psychology: Maintaining the illusion of control helps
Psychology: Put fears out in the open, then dismiss them
Sociology: Cultural norms for behaviour during pregnancy

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Devotion: Vri: Act of True Love (+3), Confess your Love (+2)?
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No


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Renown: +544
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Medals: 23
Character of the Month (1) Story of the Month (2) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) True Love (1)
Married (1) Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)
Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

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Postby Neronin » Wed Aug 16, 2017 11:57 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bonemaker: Raid
City/Area: Etzos Outskirts
Notes/Warnings: Undeath, violence

Neronin

Requested Rewards:
Necromancy: Corpse Molding
Necromancy: Gaunt
Necromancy: Customizing your Gaunts
Tactics: Using Undead as Shock Troops
Investigation: Checking The Victim's House for Items
Stealth: Creeping Up on a House

Loot: Two iron brooches with brackets for gems, draft horse and two-wheeled wagon.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer discretion
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes

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Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intimidation: Undead are Scary
Leadership: Testing Follower's Abilities
Leadership: Testing New Monstrosities
Unarmed Combat: Claws are Very Dangerous
Tactics: Using Underlings to Fight
Psychology: Children's Death's Weren't Your Fault, or Neronin's
Psychology: Donning the Persona
Investigation: Burning the Evidence

Loot: Assorted Armor and one brass ring with a black bird on it
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer discretion
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Profession: Museum Curator
Renown: +175
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Medals: 7
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Guild Master (1)
Pioneer (1) Murderer (1) Survivor (1)

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Postby Tio Silver » Wed Aug 16, 2017 12:54 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Form of the Shark 1
City/Area: Uleuda
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Difficult on hard floors
Meditation: Gets easier with age
Research: Reading up on shark facts
Research: Looking in libraries
Animal Training: Sharks have lots of sharp teeth
Animal Training: Sharks are dangerous

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Profession: Pirate Captain
Renown: +392
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Medals: 5
Story of the Month (1) Helper (1) Painting With Words (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Event Medal (1)

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Postby Edalene » Thu Aug 17, 2017 12:43 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: This Must Be The Place
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: FTB incest sex.
Requested Rewards:

Aeodan (11 Skill Knowledges)
Caretaking: Drawing a bath
Caretaking: Easing someone’s anxieties
Caretaking: Massaging sore muscles
Cooking: The perfect temperature for steak
Cooking: Roasting vegetables together
Cooking: Sauteeing asparagus for flavor
Cooking: Pairing the right wine with steak
Cooking: Finishing a steak in the oven
Psychology: Finding solutions to someone’s problems

Edalene: Depressed
Edalene: Is jealous of you and Duncan
Edalene: Appreciates you

Edalene (12 Skill Knowledges)
Psychology: Pretending You're Okay
Psychology: Focusing on the good things in life
Psychology: Affirming someone's worth
Rhetoric: Proposing a Toast

Aeodan: Wants to take care of you
Aeodan: Doesn't miss your parents
Aeodan: Has feelings for Duncan
Duncan: You're jealous of him
Red Wine: From Hiladrith


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Aeodan - +3 to Vri (help someone overcome a great sadness), +3 to Vri (an act of True Love), +5 to Cassion (dedicating a meal and story to a new adventure)
Edalene - +3 to Vri (an act of true love), +1 to Ralaith (pray to Ralaith)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Location: Ivorian Sea
Race: Human
Profession: Seeker
Renown: +39
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Medals: 18
Story of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1) In Your Favor (1) Pioneer (2)
...ow. (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) Changed (1)
Murderer (1) Scandalous (1) Keep it in the Family (1) Cheater (1)
Lol Worthy (1)

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Postby Pegasus » Thu Aug 17, 2017 11:27 am

This thread is now closed!

New Thread Here!

Please post all new requests there!
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