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Postby Edalene » Wed Jun 28, 2017 3:21 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Seasons of Change
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge
  • Intelligence: Problem Solving Gaps In Writing
  • Research: Easier To Move Backwards in History
  • Research: Working From A Core Group of Central Knowledges
  • Research: Skim Reading
  • Research: Reading Aloud Helps Understanding
  • Research: Taking Multiple Sets of Notes for Different Purposes

History Knowledge:
  • History: The Induk of Idalos Emerged First
  • History: The Dragons Aren't Well Recorded
  • History: The Shay Were The First Civilisation
  • History: The Shay Regarded The Originals As Gods
  • History: The Shay Died When The Originals Did
  • History: It Is Not Known Why The Originals Died
  • History: The Shay Did Not Seem To Have Seen The Shattering Coming
  • History: The Shay Were Linked Spiritually To The Originals

Culture Knowledge:
  • Book: The Emergence of the Originals

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None.
Collaboration: No.

Thanks! I hope I did this right!


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Postby Alistair » Thu Jun 29, 2017 12:10 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Plenipotentiary
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge
Politics: The Powers of the Eastern Half of Idalos
Politics: Betraying your liege for a better one
Negotiation: Preparing a negotiation beforehand
Politics: Seeking an ambassador for advice
Politics: Remembering your own inexperience
Deception: Baiting someone into a prank

Other Knowledge
Raskalarn: Doesn't like others sitting on thrones in her presence
Raskalarn: Enjoys others claiming for her
Kura: Phelan, Familiar
Kura: Not currently counseling the Empire
Night Vision Glasses

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes


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Medals: 39
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Shop Keeper (1) Ambassador (1) Supporter (1) Alpha Testing (1)
Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Married (1) First Kiss (1) Heartbreaker (1)
Heartbreak (1) Changed (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1) Party Animal (1)
Keep it in the Family (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Cheater (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

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Postby Yanahalqah » Fri Jun 30, 2017 11:05 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Learning by Crystal Light
City/Area: Uleuda
Notes/Warnings: A bit of punching. Some wacky dialogue. Genuvah mentions Ulehi in his first couple posts, but it's actually Qa that's being spoken.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Unarmed Combat: Sucker Punch
  2. Detection: Locating a sound's source
  3. Linguistics: Qa
  4. Qa: sounds like nonsense
  5. Qa: coded language
  6. Investigation or Intelligence: Recognizing the signs of a cult
  7. Rhetoric: dramatic voice
  8. Endurance: Bracing yourself
  9. Acrobatics: Roll to disperse impact from falling
  10. Endurance: leaning on someone to walk
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, I think? Also a damaged leg.
Fame: Probably none
Devotion: None
Collaboration: (Yes)
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Profession: Steward of the Iron Hand
Renown: +93
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Medals: 8
Painting With Words (1) Beta Bot (1) One Arc Later... (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Event Medal (1)

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Postby Kura Wolfsdotter » Sat Jul 01, 2017 1:10 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Plenipotentiary
City/Area: Rharne, The Harpy Inn
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Rupturing: Capable of Sending You Long Distances
Teaching: Continuing an Old Students Education
Teaching: Correcting a Students Mistakes
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes, with Alistair
Magic EXP: No


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Profession: Council Member
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Medals: 4
Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1) Pioneer (1) Vhalar 716 (1)

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Postby Aeon » Sat Jul 01, 2017 2:52 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Heading East [part 1]
City/Area: Uthaldria/Eastern Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Socialization: Requires you to speak to someone
Hunting: Stekir tracks
Fieldcraft: Setting up a tent
Leadership: Learning from a true leader

Korim: A reminder of Ryqos
Korim: Tends to laugh a lot
Aethelwolf: Lothar jeger (hunter)

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, killing monsters. Pretty please
Devotion: Never!
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Profession: Hero :|
Renown: +183
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Medals: 10
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Living Legend (1) ...ow. (1)
Call A Medic (1) Shopaholic (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1)
Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

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Postby Aeon » Sat Jul 01, 2017 3:39 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Heading East [part 2]
City/Area: Eastern Gauthrel (Uthaldria)
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Sounds in the wilderness
Detection: Determining the time of death of a corpse
Fieldcraft: Preparing a campfire
Swimming: Against a chaotic river
Acrobatics: Jumping off a rough surface
Acrobatics: Landing on a rough surface

Korim: Speaks Haltunga
Korim: Truly fearless
Korim: A mage?
The Lotharro: Are reborn from their corpses
Language: Haltunga
Haltunga: Language of the Lothar

Loot: Stekir hide pls
Injuries/Overstepping: Yes, on the thigh and the calf, will probably leave a bruise
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Never
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Posts: 535
Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 12:16 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Hero :|
Renown: +183
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Letters
Medals: 10
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Living Legend (1) ...ow. (1)
Call A Medic (1) Shopaholic (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1)
Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

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Postby Yanahalqah » Sat Jul 01, 2017 3:37 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Back Again
City/Area: Uleuda
Notes/Warnings: Self-loathing, probably some badly portrayed ptsd, also some combat against supernatural darkness creatures

Yanahalqah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Posts:7 (Skill related knowledge is numbered)
  1. Meditation: Reflecting on the past
  2. Strength: struggling to break free from grasp
  3. Endurance: trying to endure the silent judgement of others
  4. Negotiation: suggesting a compromise
  5. Discipline: trying to keep calm while assaulted
  6. Intelligence: Sharing information
  7. Tactics: When the situation is dire, run
  8. Rhetoric: Using arguments to support your opinion
  9. Endurance: not chickening out
  10. Ranged combat: Aiming
  11. Ranged combat: Shooting from point blank
  12. Meditation: Introspection
  • Ulehi: Chimes to communicate
  • Nulliem: Swift and agile
  • Nulliem: Usually come in groups
  • Sintih: Able commander
  • Sintih: broken Ulehi
  • Sintih: Cold and distant
  • Risalqah: Yellow
  • Risalqah: tried to help in the worst possible way
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: only mental trauma
Fame: None, I think?
Devotion: none
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: No

Sintih
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Posts:7 (Skill related knowledge is numbered)
  1. Tactics - keeping eyes in the front and back
  2. Tactics - pack mentality: sticking together saves lives
  3. Tactics - information before the battle saves lives
  4. Blades: shortsword - throwing works... sometimes
  5. Rupturing - Tethering to blink

  • Yanahalqah - afraid and useless
  • Denetuih - Ancient with crystals in all the right places
  • Sintih - of course I am in charge
  • Sintih - afraid of Nulliem?
  • Ulehi - Chimes to communicate
  • Nulliem - Swift and agile
  • Nulliem - Never alone
  • Nulliem - love you to death
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: Probably positive? Leading a team to victory in combat?
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.


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Posts: 553
Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2016 1:21 pm
Location: Andaris
Race: Yludih
Profession: Steward of the Iron Hand
Renown: +93
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Medals: 8
Painting With Words (1) Beta Bot (1) One Arc Later... (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Event Medal (1)

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Postby Aeon » Sat Jul 01, 2017 9:04 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Library Adventures!
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Really short. Really grindy. Really boring. Sorry
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Differences between Haltunga and Common
Linguistics: The intricacies of the Common language
Linguistics: Sentence structure in Common
Linguistics: Verbs vs nouns
Linguistics: Doesn’t always make perfect sense
Hunting: The monsters of Gauthrel

Abanaxus: Appearance, abilities and weaknesses
Albion: Appearance, abilities and weaknesses
Scalv Ziemia: Appearance, abilities and weaknesses

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Never!
Collaboration: Apparently also never
Magic EXP: No


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Posts: 535
Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2016 12:16 pm
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Profession: Hero :|
Renown: +183
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Letters
Medals: 10
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Living Legend (1) ...ow. (1)
Call A Medic (1) Shopaholic (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1)
Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

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Postby Alistair » Sun Jul 02, 2017 12:23 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Tidvatten
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear- Spinning Parry
Polearms: Spear - Striking Apart an Arrow
Polearms: Spear - Overhead Block
Acrobatics: Gentle Dodges
Acrobatics: Twirling Around Projectiles
Acrobatics: Persistent Evasion

Jeger: Initiation Trial Procedures
Jeger: Demand Perfection
Fields of Gauthrel: One must never be injured
Jeger Initiation: Failed

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Shallow cut across the chest, hole in shoulder - due to Sesser, Alistair will heal incredibly quickly.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Renown: +520
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Medals: 39
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Shop Keeper (1) Ambassador (1) Supporter (1) Alpha Testing (1)
Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Married (1) First Kiss (1) Heartbreaker (1)
Heartbreak (1) Changed (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1) Party Animal (1)
Keep it in the Family (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Cheater (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

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Postby Alistair » Sun Jul 02, 2017 12:28 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Insomnus
City/Area: Uthaldria, Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Insomnus
Polearms: Spear - Underarm Swing
Acrobatics: Frontflip
Acrobatics: Vertical Cartwheel
Acrobatics: Diagonal Cartwheel
Acrobatics: Fluid Voiding

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: None
Magic EXP: None


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Posts: 2273
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +520
Character Sheet
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Plot Notes
Player Review
Personal Journal
Letters
Medals: 39
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Shop Keeper (1) Ambassador (1) Supporter (1) Alpha Testing (1)
Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Married (1) First Kiss (1) Heartbreaker (1)
Heartbreak (1) Changed (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1) Party Animal (1)
Keep it in the Family (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Cheater (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

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