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Review Requests 4.0

Postby Arizeem » Fri Jun 30, 2017 4:33 pm

City Taken Place: Athart
Thread Name: Let's (en)roll!
Character(s) Involved: Solo thread, so only Arizeem.
Quick Summary: Arizeem finally decides to join the Avriel Dominion. It was harder than he thought.
Requested Knowledge: /
Other Notes: My first thread. Apologies in advance to whoever is going to read this :lol:
Fame: /
Devotion: /
Magic XP: /
Warning: Some foul language. Long-winded dialogues. I advise some pre-emptive coffee :)

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Postby Theo Nji'Ryn » Fri Jun 30, 2017 6:00 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Playing the Parts
Character(s) Involved: Zana and Theo
Quick Summary: The two discuss plans for a party that Theo is planning, as assistant manager and handler, for a customer at the Lap of Luxury.
Requested Knowledge: Business management, logistics, acting, psychology and detection maybe? Whatever seen.
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Mild but mature themes, innuendo.

Note: this has been moved to 2.1.0
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Postby Tei'serin Nji'ryn » Sun Jul 02, 2017 1:46 am

City/Area Taken Place: Treth/Ne'haer
Thread Name: [Treth] Keystones of the Future
Character(s) Involved: Tei'serin Nji'ryn, various NPCs
Quick Summary: Tei'serin grades papers, and reflects on why the task is important.
Requested Knowledge: Any that apply, but teaching knowledges about the reasons for grading assignments would be especially appreciated.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: If it applies.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: None that I can think of.


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Holiday Event 2016 (1) Cylus 717 Thread Challenge (1) Cylus 717 PC/Dev Challenge (1) Cylus 717 All Star (1)
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Postby Xander Andaris » Sun Jul 02, 2017 2:04 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Gawyne, Andaris
Thread Name: [Gawyne] The North Remembers
Character(s) Involved: Xander and Hunter
Quick Summary: Xander and Hunter make an alliance for the future of their two Duchies
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in advance
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: No warnings

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Profession: Baron and Marshal of Astedia
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One Arc Later... (1) First Love (1) True Love (1) Married (1)
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Postby Faith » Sun Jul 02, 2017 2:49 pm

Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris

Staging an Intervention
Kura, Padraig & Faith (and 2 x npcs)
Errr. Well, Padraig's grandfather and his girlfriend are living with Faith and Pad. Kura's staying with them. It's all a bit chaotic. Katie (girlfriend) thinks that Faith's doing too much and there's .. it's all just a bit of a comedy of errors, really.
Knowledge: As you see.
Magic: Nope
Fame: Maybe, aye.
Warning: Towards the end Faith talks about the realities of being a slave. Other than that, none at all and that's very mild.

Thanks for reviewing :D


New system. :)
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Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
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Postby Cal'nist » Tue Jul 04, 2017 1:25 am

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: (please provide a link to the thread) Can Anybody Hear?
Character(s) Involved: Cal'nist (and familiar)
Quick Summary: Cal'nist attempts to learn a bit of Common
Requested Knowledge: Something related to Common would be nice
Other Notes: First thread, so if I messed something up please tell me!
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: No?
Magic XP: No
Warning: No

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Postby Danielle Tobelle » Tue Jul 04, 2017 12:35 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: A Pirate At Port
Character(s) Involved: Noth, Danielle, Nauta
Quick Summary: Noth and Danielle go looking for information, and Nauta's too loud in the peanut gallery.
Requested Knowledge: As seen
Other Notes: Some violence
Fame: Negative for Noth and Danielle maybe?
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: As stated, some violence

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Postby Cal'nist » Tue Jul 04, 2017 11:27 pm

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: (please provide a link to the thread) Unquiet Mind, Unquiet Hands
Character(s) Involved: Cal'nist
Quick Summary: Just a bo staff training thread
Requested Knowledge: Whatever seems appropriate
Other Notes: Let me know if I was RPing my skills realistically.
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Safe

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Postby Noth » Wed Jul 05, 2017 2:35 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Drinks and Drunkards
City/Area: Etzos (is Bestos)
Notes/Warnings: I (Noth) went ahead and submitted my review stuff in the new system (want to give it a try), so you may ignore all of my posts and things in your grading. Cheers.
Knowledge: Whatever Works
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Vlogger Extraordinaire (1)
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In Your Favor (1) Pioneer (2) Wanted (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) First Kiss (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (2)
Enemy of My Enemy (1) Scandalous (1) Cheater (1) Lol Worthy (3)
Vhalar 716 (1) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (2)

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Postby Ctankep » Thu Jul 06, 2017 3:35 am

A Midnight Stroll

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: A Midnight Stroll (viewtopic.php?f=192&t=7667)
Character(s) Involved: Ctankep
Quick Summary: Ctankep takes a minor, but threatening midnight stroll in Andaris
Requested Knowledge: Depends
Other Notes: Nope
Fame: Depends
Devotion: Probably nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Violence And Swearing

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