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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nightshade Eld » Sun Apr 08, 2018 11:22 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Passing it On
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Just a little job thread, nothing bad
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades: Fancy tricks are done for a reason
Blades: Transfering Knowledge about Swordfighting
Blades: Basic attacks
Blades: Basic knowledge about sword types
Discipline: Having Patience for others
Teaching: Teaching about sword fighting


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Minor or Small for helping the lady.
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Vega » Mon Apr 09, 2018 7:43 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Much Ado About the Wrong Thing
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Gambling: Playing to your own advantage
Gambling: Practice shuffling to maximise fairness of the deal.
Gambling: Game: Stars: Win by having the most stars in your constellation
Gambling: Human game: snap. A game of dexterity.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Pressure is different depending on the string
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Playing scales

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no

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Posts: 1172
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Profession: Wandering, wondering.
Renown: +285
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Medals: 16
Supporter (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1) Pioneer (1)
...ow. (1) First Love (1) First Kiss (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (2)
Cylus 717 Thread Challenge (1) Cylus 717 PC/Dev Challenge (1) Cylus 717 All Star (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Lavana Tharn » Mon Apr 09, 2018 10:31 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Bazaar Revelation
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City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: Foul language.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades Two Handed Claymore; Using Disciplined Sword Strokes.
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Utalizing Both Hands On The Handle
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Horizontal Slice
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Chopping The Hand Behind The Cross Guard.
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Deflecting an adversaries weapon using leverage.
Strength; A Steel Sword Is Lighter Then Bronze

Loot:
Standard Full Plate excluding helmet and gauntlets -100gn
Extravagant Plate Helm -80 / 20x4
Extravagant Spiked Plate Gauntlets -80 / 20x4
Chainmail -60
Claymore -55
Combat Knife-5
×10 Throwing Knives -4gn
Bandolier -5gn
Leather Padding -5gn
-409

Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Alistair » Mon Apr 09, 2018 11:03 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Bucket Fist
City/Area: Cappola, Oakleigh, the Eastern Settlements
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The First Fundamental - Dispatch Efficiently
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Second Fundamental - Make Every Hit Count
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Third Fundamental - Use Every Part of Your Body
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Fourth Fundamental - Krenn Maii is Meant to Kill
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Fifth Fundamental - Be Hyper Aware
Tactics: Master everything, be countered by nothing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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My imagination is what binds ether.
 
Posts: 2273
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:12 pm
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Profession: Doctor
Renown: +520
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Medals: 39
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Shop Keeper (1) Ambassador (1) Supporter (1) Alpha Testing (1)
Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Married (1) First Kiss (1) Heartbreaker (1)
Heartbreak (1) Changed (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1) Party Animal (1)
Keep it in the Family (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Cheater (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Alistair » Mon Apr 09, 2018 11:08 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Makeover
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Meh, don't worry about it.
Loot: N/A - this was Fridgar shopping, not me
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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My imagination is what binds ether.
 
Posts: 2273
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +520
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Player Review
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Medals: 39
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Shop Keeper (1) Ambassador (1) Supporter (1) Alpha Testing (1)
Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Married (1) First Kiss (1) Heartbreaker (1)
Heartbreak (1) Changed (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1) Party Animal (1)
Keep it in the Family (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Cheater (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kasoria » Mon Apr 09, 2018 2:07 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: III. Fool's Gold
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence, as per the usual

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Acting: Playing the Fearful Underworld Bottom-Feeder
Deception: Luring Targets Out with a False Message
Deception: Bluffing Your Way Inside With a Convincing Story
Stealth: Following At a Distance
Tactics: Planning For Likely Questions
Tactics: The Ol' "What's That Behind You?" Trick


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: No Walls Beyond the Perimeter, Just the Wilderness

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Posts: 269
Joined: Sat Apr 23, 2016 11:34 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
Renown: +195
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Medals: 3
Painting With Words (1) Murderer (1) History Repeated (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Alistair » Mon Apr 09, 2018 4:07 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Bucket Fist, II
City/Area: Cappola, Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Sixth Fundamental - Fight on Your Terms
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Seventh Fundamental - Everything Is A Weapon
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: The Eighth Fundamental - Never Stop the Aggression
Unarmed Combat: Krenn Maii: Kor Koron, the First Technique
Unarmed Combat: The Magehunter's Fist, Conceptualization
Tactics: Building a fighting style to counter your foe
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
My imagination is what binds ether.
 
Posts: 2273
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +520
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Plot Notes
Player Review
Personal Journal
Letters
Medals: 39
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Shop Keeper (1) Ambassador (1) Supporter (1) Alpha Testing (1)
Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Married (1) First Kiss (1) Heartbreaker (1)
Heartbreak (1) Changed (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1) Party Animal (1)
Keep it in the Family (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Cheater (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Ryder » Mon Apr 09, 2018 7:08 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Never again part 1
City/Area: Etzos, general town area
Notes/Warnings: Part one, not really. Violence in part two though
Requested Rewards:
Detection: Noticing someone from afar
Detection: Sensing if someone is suspicious
Discipline: Putting personal interest aside
Discipline: Hiding when something is wrong
Seduction: Kissing
Seduction: Keeping someones interest

Loot: Nothing
Injuries/Overstepping: Memory thread, so nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope
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Posts: 161
Joined: Mon Jan 01, 2018 12:28 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Mercenary
Renown: +120
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Medals: 5
Supporter (1) Living Legend (1) First Kiss (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Ryder » Mon Apr 09, 2018 7:08 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Never Again pt. 2
City/Area: Still Etzos, in the town
Notes/Warnings: Torture, not too graphic. A little bit sad. Marked it as mature to be safe
Requested Rewards:
Discipline: Keeping composure in dire moments
Endurance: Rope burn
Endurance: Holding back screams
Endurance: Withstanding torture
Endurance: The pain of hypersensitive nerves
Intimidation: Threatening in the face of danger

Loot: A ded gf, sad times
Injuries/Overstepping: A scar on his chest, but memory thread so
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Posts: 161
Joined: Mon Jan 01, 2018 12:28 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Mercenary
Renown: +120
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Medals: 5
Supporter (1) Living Legend (1) First Kiss (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Ryder » Mon Apr 09, 2018 7:09 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Awaken the Fury
City/Area: Etzos, on the outskirts
Notes/Warnings: Torture and sadness (I need to stop torturing this poor guy, but Endurance knowledge)
Requested Rewards:
Discipline: Keeping as calm as possible
Discipline: Accepting love, no matter how hard
Discipline: Resisting memories of the past
Endurance: Branding
Endurance: Keeping consciousness after torture
Intimidation: Keeping eye contact in intense pain

Loot: A cool new brand (that isn't very cool)
Injuries/Overstepping: Yep, brand on his cheek and injured wrists
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope
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"The most dangerous people in the world are not the tiny minority instigating evil acts, but those who do the acts for them" ~ Suzy Kassem
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Ryder
Approved Character
 
Posts: 161
Joined: Mon Jan 01, 2018 12:28 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Mercenary
Renown: +120
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Medals: 5
Supporter (1) Living Legend (1) First Kiss (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1)

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