Review Request 2.1.3

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Genuvah » Wed Mar 21, 2018 5:42 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A New Facet
City/Area: Uleuda/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nah.
Requested Rewards: Replacing his oldest form, Aukari, with a new human one.
Knowledge:

Deception: Forging an Alter Ego
Deception: Crafting a Backstory
Detection: Warped focus to find abnormalities in two-dimensional images.
Disguise: A skewed physique
Disguise: Changing complexion
Meditation: Visualization of the goal.

Non-Skilled:

Uleuda: Meditation Chambers

Loot: Shiny new form, loses his old Aukari kid form.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Posts: 70
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Race: Yludih
Profession: Mercenary
Renown: 0
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Medals: 2
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kasoria » Wed Mar 21, 2018 11:46 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Discipline: Taking Time to Practice
Discipline: The Patience to Start with the Basics
Blades (Gladius): Block
Blades (Gladius): Parry and Counter
Blades (Gladius): Importance of Solid Footwork
Blades (Gladius): Using the Hilt as a Club


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Sergeant Tantos: Unforgiving Tutor
Blackguard Academy: Takes Recruits from All Social Strata


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Posts: 269
Joined: Sat Apr 23, 2016 11:34 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
Renown: +195
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Medals: 3
Painting With Words (1) Murderer (1) History Repeated (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Arlo Creede » Thu Mar 22, 2018 3:49 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Like the (fat) cat that got the cream
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Combat: Blades: Longsword: Use your centre of gravity
Combat: Blades: Longsword: Use your blade to deflect a large animal
Combat: Ranged Weapon: Bow: Move slowly to avoid angering predators
Combat: Ranged Weapon: Bow: Judging how many times you can shoot requires practice.
Fieldcraft: In a blizzard, dress in layers
Navigation: Land navigation in storms is tricky.
Persuasion: Never been a cat-tree in a skeleton. This is why.
Strength: Lifting a child into a tree


Loot: 1 x silver wolf pelt + teeth
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes. Saved the cat, helped the child. Maybe 2 x 5?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



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Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Attack cat works against wolves
Animal Husbandry: Rescuing cats stuck in trees
Animal Husbandry: Tone of voice matters, not words
Climbing: Fighting the wind
Climbing: Tree climbing in a blizzard
Climbing: Navigating something which bends
Fieldcraft: In a blizzard, dress in layers
Navigation: Land navigation in storms is tricky.
Persuasion: Never been a cat-tree in a skeleton. This is why.


Loot: 1 x silver wolf pelt + teeth
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Helped the girl, saved the cat, climbed the tree. Maybe 2 x 5?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Profession: Traveler
Renown: +423
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Medals: 13
Story of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) First Love (1) Dreamer (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (2) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Mercedes » Thu Mar 22, 2018 4:08 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:The Pathfinder
City/Area: Sweetwine woods, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A guy gets his head smashed with a rock, and Merces takes the form.
Requested Rewards: Points?
Knowledge: Anything that works, Neither poppy nor I are picky.
Loot: 1 Becoming Totem Half Ellune(Ellune + Human ) for Merces (Poppy stole something from the wagon and would like it to be a random item/items/etc reviewers choice)
Injuries/Overstepping: No injuries
Renown: Murder, Poppy, and uh... No clue?
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (Yes) Both Poppy(Attunement) and Merces(Becoming)

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The Child Of Destiny
 
Posts: 245
Joined: Fri Nov 03, 2017 10:37 pm
Location: Scalvoris
Race: Human
Profession: Sorcerer
Renown: +180
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Medals: 5
Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Murderer (1)
Survivor (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Vega » Thu Mar 22, 2018 6:32 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Little Girl With Great Big Plans
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Gambling: Shuffling the pack
Gambling: Dealing
Gambling: Biqaj card game: Stars
Gambling: You need to practice to keep your skill
Negotiation: My pain is worse than yours.
Persuasion: Putting forward a reasonable argument.

Loot: Ledger is up to date for purchases
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no

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Phoenix from the flames
 
Posts: 1173
Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2017 1:43 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Wandering, wondering.
Renown: +285
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Medals: 16
Supporter (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1) Pioneer (1)
...ow. (1) First Love (1) First Kiss (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (2)
Cylus 717 Thread Challenge (1) Cylus 717 PC/Dev Challenge (1) Cylus 717 All Star (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Victor Amielle » Fri Mar 23, 2018 3:49 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Plagiarism
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This thread smells bad!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: Plagiarism: a serious offensive
Research: Always put your quotations in quotation marks
Research: Compiling an enumerative bibliography
Research: Funding for magical research can be hard to come by
Cooking: Making garlic paste
Disguise: Making yourself unattractive to others
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Slight (5) - People definitely noticed that smell!
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Posts: 222
Joined: Wed Jul 26, 2017 11:29 am
Location: Scalvoris
Race: Human
Profession: Researcher
Renown: +125
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Medals: 3
Hoarder (1) Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Woe » Fri Mar 23, 2018 8:26 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Ring of Lashes
City/Area: Augiery
Notes/Warnings: Violence, dirty fighting, crotch shots, biting, etc.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Endurance: Recovering from a tackle
Endurance: Surviving a bearhug
Endurance: Taking a shot to the crotch
Sociology: Meritocracy of the Slave Pits
Tactics: Lowering your value as a target
Tactics: Staying out of range until ready to fight
Unarmed Combat(Striking): No arms? no legs? headbutt!
Unarmed Combat(grappling): Exploiting an opening
Unarmed Combat(grappling): Striking while in very close quarters
Unarmed Combat(grappling): Using leverage to pop a joint out of its socket
Unarmed Combat(Striking): Attacking nerve endings to increase pain

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Beaten up, bruised, concussion, maybe a broken rib.
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Location: Augiery
Race: Human
Profession: Langilea
Renown: +23
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Rorom » Fri Mar 23, 2018 11:45 am

Rewards Requested


PC Name: Rorom
Thread Name: Chrien testing, U'frek approved.
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards: (Dunno since it's abandoned, kinda.) 1517 words for me.
Knowledge:

Storytelling: Recounting an experience
Storytelling: Discussing the way stories change over time
Socialization: Making the first impression
Socialization: Establishing common ground
Fishing: Fishing nets take much work to craft
Meditation: Prayer soothes the grief of a loss

Non-skill knowledge:

PC: Moiran, an Biqaj Priestess
Pc: Moiran, Tells good stories
PC: Moiran, Wise beyond her years

U'frek: Fished mankind from their deaths.
Chrien: Immortal of Storms occupies a space in U'frek's temple
U'Frek and Chrien: Linked through their struggle against the other.
Location: Northern Wing of the Temple of Ne'haer
Location: Altar of Chrien and U'Frek

Loot: Disposed of a broken fishing net.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: +3 for visiting U'frek's temple to make an appropriate offering.
Collaboration: Yes, but unfinished/abandoned
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested


PC Name: Moiran
Thread Name: Chrien testing, U'frek approved.
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards: Again, not sure. She wrote 607
Knowledge:

Storytelling: Framing a story well
Storytelling: Lending personal experience to your story.
Socialization: Bonding your own personal experience to another's misfortune.
Socialization: Making a good impression.

Non-Skill Knowledge:

PC: Rorom; an honest sailor and fisherman
PC: Rorom; an ignorant devotee of U'Frek and Chrien

Location: Northern Wing of the Temple of Ne'haer
Location: Altar of Chrien and U'Frek

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: 5 for spreading knowledge of the gods to someone curious about the Immortals.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Location: Ne'Haer
Race: Biqaj
Profession: fisherman
Renown: +20
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Arlo Creede » Fri Mar 23, 2018 5:20 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Life After Death
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Forcing yourself not to look at your mangled legs
Discipline Focus on the practical to avoid looking at your emotions
Discipline: Calming yourself down when furious
Endurance: Putting up with pain rather than making yourself drowsy
Endurance: Pain-related nausea


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: NA in this thread
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



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Knowledge:
Caregiving: How to not make someone more worried
Caregiving: Remain positive to help healing
Caregiving: Point out beneficial side effects
Detection: Hearing someone engaged in prayer
Discipline Focus on the practical to avoid looking at your emotions
Discipline: Keeping hold of your temper as much as possible.
Negotiation: State clearly when something is out of the question

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Not in this thread.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Posts: 1048
Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2017 5:15 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Traveler
Renown: +423
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Medals: 13
Story of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) First Love (1) Dreamer (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (2) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Tio Silver » Sat Mar 24, 2018 5:27 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Here Comes the Boom!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence against wolves.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Banshee Powder
Alchemy: Using Yellow Dragon Wood in alchemy
Alchemy: Using Wraithgrass in alchemy
Alchemy: The quieting property of Wraithgrass
Alchemy: How to make magical gunpowder
Chemistry: Yellow Dragon Charchol


Loot:
-100gn
9 x 10lb bag of Banshee Powder (Gunpowder alchemically enhanced to be a little stronger and quieter)
Bag of Smoke Bombs

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Bad in all the Good Ways
 
Posts: 673
Joined: Thu Apr 13, 2017 11:04 am
Race: Yludih
Profession: Pirate Captain
Renown: +392
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Medals: 5
Story of the Month (1) Helper (1) Painting With Words (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Event Medal (1)

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