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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Noth » Mon Feb 12, 2018 5:51 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Making New Friends
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Street-Fighting, Finishes a bit abruptly, but not so badly that it looks entirely unfinished.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed: Taking a Hit
Unarmed: Knowing Where to Strike
Unarmed: Inflicting Painful Blows
Intimidation: Taking Big Guys First
Intimidation: Severing Hostile Leadership
Intimidation: Pressganging Gangsters

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises from fighting
Fame: Light amount of Negative for roughing up and recruiting thugs.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Finnegan O'Connor » Mon Feb 12, 2018 6:38 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I Won't Tell If You Don't
City/Area: Foster's Landing (Etzos)
Notes/Warnings: Children.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Ivanthe
Stealth: keep to the shadows
Stealth: always keep an ear out
Stealth: hiding in the hay
Discipline: fighting through fear
Fieldcraft: hay makes for a warm night
Empathy: the color of honesty
Empathy: honesty within a Tangle
Deception: stay plausible
Deception: the convenient father
Deception: physical evidence is key
Discipline: calm under questioning

Finnegan O'Connor: young and up to no good
Finnegan O'Connor: knows more than he tells
Finnegan O'Connor: a friend in dark places
Location: Foster's Landing stables
Location: Foster's Landing bakery
Location: Etzos: has a market for ne'er-do-wells

Finnegan
Stealth: sneaking out of a camp at night
Defiance: Earth alerts you of a nearby stranger.
Defiance: Making fire dance.
Detection: A camp is an odd place to go hunting
Stealth: Stealing buns unseen
Running: bolting toward the stables
Caregiving: offering Ivanthe a place to stay
Stealth: Entering the stables unseen
Deception: lying to Ivanthe to test his trustworthiness
Stealth: Stealing pasties unseen
Pick-pocketing: Stealing pasties unseen

[Reviewer's note: stealing buns and stealing pasties were seperate events in the thread, hence the seperate knowledges]

Ivanthe: Younger than you
Ivanthe: Hunter
Ivanthe: Seems cold
Ivanthe: Doesn't like talking about his parents
Ivanthe: A decent thief
Ivanthe: Eager to learn

Location: Foster's Landing stables
Location: Foster's Landing bakery

Loot: 2 uneaten pasties for Finn.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: YES
Magic EXP: YES, for both.


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Neronin » Mon Feb 12, 2018 11:58 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dangerous Doors
City/Area: Etzos, Al’Angyryl Cavern
Notes/Warnings: Magic explosions!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Compression Portals
Rupturing: Compression is longer range
Rupturing: Compression costs more than Chasing
Rupturing: Chasing Portals
Rupturing: Chasing is short range
Writing: Writing quickly to document

Magic: Overstepping: Ghost Call
Magic: Overstepping: Extreme Nausea

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Overstepping, Nausea for 2 trials, Ghost Call for 5 breaks.
Fame: -2 Magic use, -2 reckless magical destruction of base
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes, Rupturing


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Arlo Creede » Tue Feb 13, 2018 3:04 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Interludes
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge: (8 posts: 13 knowledge)
Blades: Sword: How to hold a sword to mitigate against pain.
Blades: Sword: Use momentum rather than leverage with limited movement
Climbing: Rough terrain
Climbing: Weather makes a difference.
Discipline: Not yelling out to stop others from getting upset
Endurance: Trying to manage a dislocated shoulder.
Endurance: Climbing down a tree with a dislocated shoulder
Endurance: Forcing yourself to move when in extreme pain
Endurance: Crawling with a dislocation is hard.
Endurance: Forcing your arm to move when your shoulder is out of its socket
Endurance: Fighting when in pain
Meditation: Relax and breathe around pain.
Ranged Combat: Bow: Shoulder pain impacts aim

Geoupagus: An Immortal Arlo made up?
The tale of Geoupagus
The Granitee: The children of Geoupagus
Location: Caves beneath Scalvoris
Flora: Underground trees?

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Defeating 2 x rats!
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Arlo

Knowledge: (8 posts: 13 knowledge)
Blades: Be careful to consider your position in close quarters
Blades: Spin on your heel and swing
Blades: Wide arc for maximum impact
Blade: Charge forward
Climbing: Rough terrain
Climbing: Helping each other makes it easier
Climbing: Anchoring rope for leverage
Climbing: Rappelling down
Storytelling: The tale of the Immortal Geoupagus
Storytelling: The Granitee: The children of Geoupagus
Strength: Holding your weight on a rope
Strength: Keeping yourself still whilst descending requires upper body strength.
Strength: Carrying someone over a slippery surface


Vega: Guillible.
Location: Caves beneath Scalvoris
Flora: Underground trees?

Loot: Teeth and claws from 4 x giant rats.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Defeating 2 x rats, helping Vega, climbing down to save her
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Tessa » Tue Feb 13, 2018 5:23 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Birds of a Feather
City/Area: Rynmere/Venora
Notes/Warnings: No. This is a request for rewards on a thread also requested a few pages ago. Apologies for any inconvenience.
Requested Rewards:


Celeste

Knowledge:
Discipline: Not giving in to how you feel
Discipline: Do not show your fear, or your need
Endurance: Remaining standing while exhausted
Endurance: Take a break
Endurance: Know when to admit defeat.
Etiquette: Ensuring that you smile, even in awkward moments.
Politics:Show no weakness, even when exhausted
Politics: Sometimes, it's important to state the obvious
Politics: Unique political situations occur 9 times out of 10

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No idea!
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Xander

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Stubborn people make the worst patients.
Caregiving: Sit down and have a drink of water
Etiquette: Awkward moments still require appropriate greetings
Politics: Don't forget titles, even when finding people in a state of undress.
Politics: Remain strong until alone
Politics: Unique political situations occur 9 times out of 10
Strength: Carrying your heavily pregnant wife is quite a feat!
Strength: Redistribute your own weight to ensure maximum efficiency
Strength: Pause and readjust

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Helped celeste
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Padraig » Tue Feb 13, 2018 6:40 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Post Partum
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: No.
Requested Rewards:


Faith

Knowledge:
Caregiving: It's always alright to check one more time on newborns
Endurance: Violence and birth aftereffects are painful


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Padraig

Knowledge:
Caregiving: It's always alright to check one more time on newborns
Caregiving: Caring for newborns
Caregiving: Caring for new mothers
Discipline: Not giving in to your own worries

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) True Love (1)
Married (1) Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)
Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Tue Feb 13, 2018 8:07 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sugar Rush viewtopic.php?f=169&t=5295
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards: Just my 15 points, please
Knowledge: Nothing interesting that I want
Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: I prefer negative.
Collaboration: Yes. Tirta is retired, though. Part of a series of threads. It might be confusing but don't give it too much thought. Just slap my 15 points and we're done.
Magic EXP: No

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Medals: 14
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Mentor (1) One Arc Later... (1) Pioneer (1)
Murderer (1) Scandalous (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (3)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Tue Feb 13, 2018 8:23 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Let the bodies hit the flour viewtopic.php?f=169&t=5025
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence, magic, bad words.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Checking for sounds
Strength: Dragging bodies
Deception: Riding the lies of others
Negotiation: Mutual benefit
Rhetoric: Twisting legality
Persuasion: Enforcing one’s lies
Ettiquette: Fancy words
Negotiation: Repaying debts

Location: Etzori Underground

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Negative, because we killed people and wanted to do bad things with corpses.
Collaboration: Yes, with Neronin. He got his grade; now I deserve mine.
Magic EXP: Not for me

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Medals: 14
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Mentor (1) One Arc Later... (1) Pioneer (1)
Murderer (1) Scandalous (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (3)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Caius Gawyne » Wed Feb 14, 2018 12:58 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I only have eyes for you
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nah. Just some social awkwardness amongst nobles.

Requested Rewards:

Caius Gawyne


Skill Knowledge (8+3=11):
Detection: Straining to hear what you want over conversation
Detection: Signs of alcohol intoxication
Detection: Making eye contact in a crowd
Dancing: Keeping step with an intoxicated partner
Dancing: Feeling the music even when you don't
Discipline: Knowing when to step out of conversation
Psychology: Too many women, only one conscience
Psychology: Jealousy
Sociology: Admitting you can't say anything nice
Rhetoric: Crushing a suitor's dreams
Rhetoric: Claiming what's yours

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Valeria Burhan: Fainted while dancing with you
Valeria Burhan: Committed to fashion
Valeria Burhan: Uncomplicated friendship, complicated situation
Darcyanna Venora: Has a jealous streak
Darcyanna Venora: Danced with Bram Hayward
NPC: Bram Hayward: Moseke Knight
Bram Hayward: Had eyes on yo' girl
Bram Hayward: Not a bad guy, actually

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.


Darcyanna Venora


Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Finding your target in a crowd
Dancing: One-two step
Sociology: There’s more than one way to be rude
Sociology: Feeling feels that suck
Politics: Navigating an awkward situation
Leadership: Issuing orders
Medicine: Finding the source of the problem

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Slept with Valeria a while before you met
Caius Gawyne: Isn’t very good at handling your new feelings
Caius Gawyne: Doesn’t do well against two women’s wrath
Valeria Burhan: Is an old friend of Caius’
Valeria Burhan: Slept with Caius a while before you met
Valeria Burhan: wears corsets

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.


Valeria Burhan


Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Spotting when your presence is unwanted
Persuasion: Sometimes honesty is the best policy
Dancing: Swaying to music
Rhetoric: Comfortable banter
Politics: Good looks can help you catch the right eyes
Endurance: Pulling yourself together after fainting
Politics: Being diplomatic in rocky situations
Detection: Spotting couple trouble
Intimidation: Flinging objects at your target to bolster a verbal threat
Rhetoric: Providing comfort

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Fainted in his arms at the gala
Fainting in public: Humiliation that can't be lived down - ever!
Darcyanna Venora: Helped you when you fainted at the gala
Ser Haywood (NPC): Helped you when you fainted at the gala
Darcyanna Venora: Suspicious of your past with Caius
Darcyanna Venora: The jealous type
Darcyanna Venora: Insecure in her relationship with Caius

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruising, lots and lots of bruising. There is potential for a cracked rib, which would be one of the low "floating" ribs. Mainly lots and lots of bruising on her torso though. The fluid thing passes with a few good coughing spells. All the same, it'll probably stick with her for a trial or two.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion, probably negative because drama. Positive would be lovely but I highly, highly doubt that it's gonna happen.
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Caius Gawyne » Wed Feb 14, 2018 1:16 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Prophecies and Truths
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: A lot of feelings.

Requested Rewards:

Caius Gawyne


Skill Knowledge (8+2=10):
Endurance: Surviving a second set of stitches
Endurance: Immobilization to minimize pain
Discipline: Determination in the face of adversity
Discipline: Meaning what you say
Rhetoric: Mortality is already too fucking short.
Rhetoric: Admitting your past experimentations
Psychology: Finally telling the whole story
Psychology: Death
Psychology: Immortals and prophecy
Psychology: The truth hurts

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Darcyanna Venora: Believes Immortals are Fairy Tales
Darcyanna Venora: Is more Rynlist than you
Darcyanna Venora: Doesn't believe in your prophecies
Darcyanna Venora: Would rather die than lose you
Darcyanna Venora: Knows of your Envoy gift
Darcyanna Venora: Knows you're supposed to die on Zi'da 91, 717

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.


Darcyanna Venora


Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Holding yourself together until alone
Resistance: Staying sane under extreme stress
Politics: Using humour to conceal your fears
Sociology: Admitting things said in desperate moments are real
Psychology: Sharing your experience to help a trauma victim cope
Research: Religion: Rynlism is the true path
Research: Religion: Immortals are not good
Discipline: Coming apart at the seams is not an option.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Knows his natural date of death
Caius Gawyne: Is dying 91st Zi’da, 717
Caius Gawyne: Kept this from you for seasons!
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Medals: 7
Story of the Month (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (2)
First Kiss (1) Cheater (1)

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